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many people spoil natural beauties like sea, beaches, mountains and lakes. do people responsible for that? what should be done to stop people to spoil natural beauty? give the reasons and examples for your answer. v.2

many people spoil natural beauties like sea, beaches, mountains and lakes. do people responsible for that? what should be done to stop people to spoil natural beauty? give the reasons and examples for your answer. v. 2
Tourist places like beaches, hills and mountains attract a large number of visitors. The increase in human activity in these places also leads to littering. In fact, littering has become a major environmental issue in many tourist places. When tourists throw around plastic cans and bottles, they not only destroy the natural beauty of picnic places but also cause many environmental problems. Fish and wild animals often swallow polythene wrappers while trying to eat the leftover food in them. This causes infection inside their body and eventually leads to their death. People are thronging to wildlife sanctuaries to get an opportunity to watch animals in their natural habitat. Unfortunately, they also leave behind a lot of things that can harm the environment and the wildlife. In order to prevent this from happening, we need stringent laws. The government should impose hefty fines on people who violate these laws. There is little we can achieve by enacting laws. Enforcement is the key. For example, India has plenty of laws to protect the environment. Unfortunately, these laws aren’t always enforced and littering is rampant in this part of the world. The government should also install facilities like recycling machines where tourists can drop their plastic bottles and cans. Another solution is to encourage the use of natural and biodegradable materials instead of plastic. In addition, the government should consider running eateries in these places where people can buy good food and water at reasonable rates. In many picnic places restaurants overcharge tourists. This forces many tourists to carry food and snacks with them. If there are restaurants and eateries that offer hygienic food at affordable rates, people will be less inclined to carry their food with them. To conclude, picnic spots attract a large number of visitors. Unfortunately, this leads to littering. The only viable solution to this problem is to limit and discourage the use of plastic in these places through stringent laws and by installing recycling machines.
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like beaches, hills and mountains attract
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a large number of
visitors. The increase in human activity in these
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also
leads to
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littering
. In fact,
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has become a major environmental issue in
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tourist
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throw around
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plastic
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cans
and bottles, they not
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destroy
the natural beauty of picnic
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cause
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environmental problems. Fish and wild animals
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often
swallow polythene wrappers while trying to eat the leftover
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food
in them. This causes infection inside their body and
eventually
leads to their death.
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People
are thronging to wildlife sanctuaries to
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get
an opportunity to
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watch
animals in their natural habitat. Unfortunately, they
also
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leave
behind
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a lot of
things that
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harm the environment and the wildlife.

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prevent
this from happening, we need stringent
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laws
. The
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government
should impose hefty fines on
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people
who violate these
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laws
. There is
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we
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achieve by enacting
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. Enforcement is the key.
For example
, India has
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plenty
of
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laws
to protect the environment. Unfortunately, these
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aren’t always enforced and
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littering
is rampant in this part of the world.

The
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government
should
also
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tourists
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drop their
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plastic
bottles and
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cans
. Another solution is to encourage the
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use
of natural and biodegradable materials
instead
of
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plastic
.
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, the
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government
should consider running eateries in these
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where
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picnic
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restaurants overcharge
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. This forces
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to carry
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and snacks with them. If there are restaurants and eateries that offer hygienic
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food
at affordable rates,
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people
will be less inclined to carry their
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food
with them.

To conclude
, picnic spots attract
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a large number of
visitors. Unfortunately, this leads to
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littering
. The
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only
viable solution to this problem is to limit and discourage the
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use
of
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plastic
in these
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places
through stringent
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laws
and by installing recycling machines.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
41Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay many people spoil natural beauties like sea, beaches, mountains and lakes. do people responsible for that? what should be done to stop people to spoil natural beauty? give the reasons and examples for your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
327 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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