Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Many people spend their money as they it . Is the positive or negative development?

Many people spend their money as they it. Is the positive or negative development? KG329

Nowadays it is becoming a habit for many people to spend their money as soon as they get it. I believe this is an extremely negative habit for the reasons explained below. To begin with, this trend is harmful as Saving is an utterly necessary part of human life. It is important to save money as this helps in dealing with any negative situation or requirement that may come up in the future. For instance, it could be an emergency medical expense, or the fee for a college degree that may require one to draw from ones saved money. Whatever the case is, spending money Immediately can deprive one of these much needed benefits in the future, and should thus be avoided in favour of a secure future ahead. Moreover, this level of immediate extravagance can also impact the coming generation negatively. To explain, children learn many important skills in life from their parents, one of which is saving. But children brought up in families that do not save, do not get to learn this necessary skill themselves. What this means is that not saving in the present moment can lead to complication for the coming generations in the far future. Thus, such a behaviour should be seen as negative as it jeopardizes the future of the generations ahead. In conclusion, spending money as one gets it is a destructive tendency as it might deprive both the present and the future generations of monetary leverage during the crucial phases of life

Nowadays it is becoming a habit for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to spend their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it. I believe this is an extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 habit for the reasons This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpreted
explained
 below.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, this trend is harmful as Saving is an utterly
 necessary part of human life. It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to save You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 as this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 in dealing with any This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 situation or requirement that may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 up in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
. For instance
, it could be an emergency medical expense, or the fee for a college degree that may require one to draw from ones saved You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
. Whatever the case is, spending You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 Immediately can deprive one of these This word is normally spelled with hyphen.much-needed
much needed
 benefits in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
, and should thus
be avoided
 in Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
 of a secure You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
 ahead.

Moreover
, this level of immediate extravagance can also
 impact the coming generation negatively
. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
, children learn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 in life from their parents, one of which is saving. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 children brought up in families that do not save, do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to learn this necessary This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 themselves. What this means is that not saving in the present moment can lead to complication for the coming generations in the far You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
. Thus
, such a Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour
 should be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 as it jeopardizes the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
 of the generations ahead.

In conclusion
, spending You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 as one This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 it is a destructive tendency as it might deprive both the present and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
 generations of monetary leverage during the crucial phases of life