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Many people say that cooking and eating healthily is better for individual's health

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Nowadays, in spite of having takeouts, consuming healthy and nutritious meals - prepared is such a phenomenon. From my perspective, I completely agree with this statement. To begin with, cooking and eating healthily ensure food safety. To be more specific, consumers have their own choice of high-quality ingredients depending on their demand for calories as well as portion balance. General statistics have shown that a majority of Japanese spend 1 hour per day on homecooked- meals for a variety of lean meat choices. Therefore, a balanced- portion of elements do enhance health conditions. In contrast, the abuse of ready meals exerts health negatively. To specify, junk foods containing a high rate of fat are mostly cooked through frying and roasting process before being served. It is exemplified in the USA whose population is always on top of the obesity and cholesterol list due to eating MC Donal’s fast food for all 3 meals. Subsequently, overconsuming ready meals weaken the eater's immune system and poison individual's organs. In conclusion, contrarily to takeout, healthy meals have been being the indispensable factor toward human's well- being in regard the to quality of food. Moreover, I do believe that being served nutritious meals should be appreciated and spread out to different age groups.
Nowadays,
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having takeouts, consuming healthy and nutritious
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meals
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prepared is such a phenomenon. From my perspective, I completely
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agree
with this statement.

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begin
with, cooking and eating
healthily
ensure
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food
safety. To be more specific, consumers have their
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own
choice of high-quality ingredients depending on their demand for calories
as well
as portion balance. General statistics have shown that a majority of Japanese spend 1 hour per day on
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homecooked
-
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meals
for a variety of lean meat choices.
Therefore
, a balanced- portion of elements do enhance health conditions.

In contrast
, the abuse of ready
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meals
exerts health
negatively
. To specify, junk
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foods
containing a high rate of
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fat
are
mostly
cooked through frying and roasting process
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before
being served
. It
is exemplified
in the USA whose population is always on top of the obesity and cholesterol list due to eating MC
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Donal
’s
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fast
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food
for all 3
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meals
.
Subsequently
,
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overconsuming
ready
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meals
weaken the eater's immune system and poison individual's organs.

In conclusion
,
contrarily
to takeout, healthy
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meals
have been being the indispensable factor toward human's well- being in regard the to quality of
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food
.
Moreover
, I do believe that
being served
nutritious
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meals
should
be appreciated
and spread out to
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different
age groups.
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IELTS essay Many people say that cooking and eating healthily is better for individual's health

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
209 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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