Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Describe a situation when something in your house was broken or stopped working

Describe a situation when something in your house was broken or stopped working PXqjg

When I was in grade 6, my parents bought a TV for me to watch in my room. After having put effort into the “first-term exam”, I unwinded by watching film on TV. Because of indulging in watching, I used my TV for a long time. As a result of being used constantly, the TV’s screen went black. That it stopped working scared the pants off me, my heart was beating fast and I did not understand what to do now. Finally, I decided to tell all things to my parents. They said to me be relaxed and calmed. Next day, my dad went to an electrician shop to repair my TV. Unfortunately, it was permanently damaged. On the end, I learned a lesson electronically thing needs extra care and time to sleep also.

When I was in grade 6, my parents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a TV for me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 in my room. After having put effort into the “first
-term exam”, I Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "unwound", the past tense form of the verb 'unwind'?unwound
unwinded
 by watching film on TV. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of indulging in watching, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 my TV for a long time. As a result
 of being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
constantly
, the TV’s screen went black. That it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceaseddiscontinued
stopped
 working scared the pants off me, my heart was beating This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 and I did not understand what to do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. Finally
, I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 all things to my parents. They said to me be relaxed
 and calmed. Next
 day, my dad went to an electrician shop to repair my TV. Unfortunately, it was permanently
 damaged. On the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, I learned a lesson electronically
 thing needs extra care and time to sleep also
. 