Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Language is an integral part of any individuals life. A school of thought believe that it is better for children to bilingual at primary school where as some people think it will be burden on children

Language is an integral part of any individuals life. A school of thought believe that it is better for children to bilingual at primary school where as some people think it will be burden on children so we will discuss every aspect prior to any conclusion. To begin with, in the younger age children's brain is very active and they can easily catch things. In other words, they can learn new things very rapidly and easily adapt to the environment. Moreover, their ability to understanding multi language simultaneously is very fast as their proficiency level will be high. Despite, their command on particular language will become impressively strong as well as fluency will also become very excellent whereas in the students who acquire knowledge of foreign language in secondary school they do a lot of mistakes and errors as well as their fluency will also very weak. Furthermore, by gaining an understanding of another language along with native language, children can explore world with more ease and there will be no longer language barriers at all. By multi language learning people can easily communicate with world and there are many possibilities arise with this skill such as jobs in abroad and they can also went there for higher studies. With this the confidence level of children also increases and they can make new friend globally. In conclusion, many people thought that it will be burden for children if they learn many language simultaneously but it is not the right approach. So, I personally consider that learning new language at primary school will be beneficial for children for their bright future.

You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
Language
 is an integral part of any Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "individuals'" or "individual's"?individuals'individual's
individuals
 life. A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 believe that it is better for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 to bilingual at primary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it will be burden on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we will discuss every aspect prior to any conclusion.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, in the younger age children's brain is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).active, and
active and
 they can easily
 catch things. In other words
, they can learn new things This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
rapidly
 and easily
 adapt to the environment. Moreover
, their ability to understanding multi You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
simultaneously
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 as their proficiency level will be high. Despite, their command on particular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 will become impressively
 strong as well
 as fluency will also
 become This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excellent whereas in the students who acquire knowledge of foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 in secondary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 they do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 mistakes and errors as well
 as their fluency will also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 weak.

Furthermore
, by gaining an understanding of another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 along with native You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 can explore world with more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
ease
 and there will be no longer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 barriers at all. By multi You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 learning This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can easily
 communicate with world and there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 possibilities arise with this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 such as jobs in Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).abroad, and
abroad and
 they can also
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "go"go
went
 there for higher studies. With this the confidence level of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
also
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).increases, and
increases and
 they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 new friend globally.

In conclusion
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 that it will be burden for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 if they learn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
simultaneously
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is not the right approach. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I personally
 consider that learning new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 at primary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 will be beneficial for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 for their bright future. 