Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Many people say that all schools should have various suitable kinds of club for students to join in after school. Write a paragraph (about 150- 180 words) to express your opinions about this statement

Many people say that all schools should have various suitable kinds of club for students to join in after school. Write a paragraph (about 150- 180 words) to express your opinions about this statement pLQp0

It is often said that every school should have a lot of proper clubs for students to participate in after school. Personally, I completely agree with this statement. Firstly, taking part in a club will create a good opportunity for us to develop practical skills, including communication, problem-solving, and confidence. it requires us to work together to build clear strategies for our organization's development or struggle with complicated issues. Therefore, it is definitely an advantageous choice to confidently speak in public. We can expand the relationships and get to understand one another. Nowadays, they are various choices of club or project to apply for such as volunteer club, foreign language club, and book club. Secondly, joining clubs will enhance scholarship opportunities for international universities because not only is it dependent on our GPA but also our dynamism. For example, RMIT University Vietnam scholarship applications always require achievements of participating in extracurricular activities or clubs. In conclusion, I would concur with the opinion that suitable clubs for students ought to be established due to the importance of their personal development and entertainment.

It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 said that every school should have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 proper You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
clubs
 for students to participate in after school. Personally
, I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this statement. Firstly
, taking part in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 will create a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 opportunity for us to develop practical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
, including communication, problem-solving, and confidence. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 requires us to work together to build This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 strategies for our organization's development or struggle with complicated issues. Therefore
, it is definitely an advantageous choice to confidently
 speak in public. We can expand the relationships and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to understand one another. Nowadays, they are various choices of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
 or project to apply for such as volunteer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
, foreign language You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
, and book You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
club
. Secondly
, joining You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
clubs
 will enhance scholarship opportunities for international universities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 is it dependent on our GPA This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 our dynamism. For example
, Possible spelling mistake found.EmitRemitOmitRMIREITMIT
RMIT
 University Vietnam scholarship applications always require achievements of participating in extracurricular activities or You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
clubs
. In conclusion
, I would concur with the opinion that suitable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusinessstaff
clubs
 for students ought to be established
 due to the importance of their personal development and entertainment. 