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many people prefer to watch foreign films than domestic-produced films.

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There is a view that many people prefer to watch foreign films than domestic-produced films. The article below will explain the above and answer the question of whether the government should provide more financial support in the local film industry. Why are audiences increasingly interested in foreign films? In general, Vietnamese audiences are very fond of the genre of action entertainment, superheroes. This is a film that requires huge funding for staging, craftsmanship. With a young and difficult cinema, Vietnamese films in this genre are difficult to satisfy viewers. Therefore, audiences always prioritize enjoying foreign action films. For example, instead of making single films, they made a series with a system of related characters such as Marvel, Star Wars, DC Warner Bros. That's one of the reasons why more people prefer to watch foreign movies. In the world, cinema is both an integrated art industry and an industry. The film industry is an inevitable development trend in countries, an important part of the cultural industry. In our country, the government has pointed out: "The development of cultural industry goes hand in hand with building and perfecting the cultural market". In fact, our country is a fledgling cinema, lacking too many human and material resources so this race is not balanced. Therefore, the government should provide financial support to the local film industry. The state's preference for film establishments is essential. Because it's a practical act to stimulate businesses to invest in the film sector. In short, there should be major policy orientations to encourage cinema to work for the people, linking the development of the film industry with the country's socio-economic development plan towards a unified market and fair competition. Overall, the core to the development of the film industry is meaningful.
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should provide more financial support in the local film industry.

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interested in
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foreign
films?
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fond of the genre of action entertainment, superheroes. This is a film that requires huge funding for staging, craftsmanship. With a young and difficult
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cinema
, Vietnamese films in this genre are difficult to satisfy viewers.
Therefore
, audiences always prioritize enjoying
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foreign
action films.
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instead
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people
prefer to
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In the world,
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cinema
is both an integrated art
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industry
and an
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. The film
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industry
is an inevitable
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development
trend in countries, an
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industry
. In our country, the
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government
has pointed out:
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, lacking too
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human and material resources
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this race is not balanced.
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, the
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should provide financial support to the local film
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. The state's preference for film establishments is essential.
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it's a practical act to stimulate businesses to invest in the film sector.

In short, there should be major policy orientations to encourage
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cinema
to work for the
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, linking the
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development
of the film
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socio-economic
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plan towards a unified market and
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competition.
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, the core to the
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of the film
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is meaningful.
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IELTS essay many people prefer to watch foreign films than domestic-produced films.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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