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many people prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life, whereas others prefer to change the type of work. discuss both sides and state your own opinion.

many people prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life, whereas others prefer to change the type of work. 5dGD
For a living, everyone need to have a job. in this fast pace modern era, everybody want to earns a good money. for some people their profession doesn't matter but other choose high standard living instead of rich lifestyle. in this eassy, i intent to describe both point of views. however, i believe that changing in work bring more positivity in life. There are many reasons that some people stick to their job for whole life. Firstly, they are too comfortable with their ongoing job that they do not want to do any efforts to change their job. Secondly, they don't have enough skills to do another job. for example, some only learnt about one field due to that even if they want ot change their job they cannot. On the other hand, others think changing job bring positivity and bring life into your lives. For example, if you stick with your job that you don’t like for too long you are going to hate your job and life. You will feel to no to go to work. Moreover, if you change your profession you will get to learn something different that makes to excited about your job. Hence therefore you can earn and enjoy your life at sametime. In the conclusion, both sides have strong supported argument. Some people want to stick to their jobs for lifetime while others find out fun and excitement in changing jobs. For me personally, I believe in changing job to enjoy my work.
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in
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pace modern era, everybody
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to
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earns
a
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money.
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some
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people
their profession doesn't matter
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other
choose high standard living
instead
of rich lifestyle.
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in
this
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eassy
, i
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intent
to
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describe
both point of views.
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however
,
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i
believe that
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changing
in work bring more positivity in life.

There are
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reasons that
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some
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people
stick to their
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job
for whole
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life
.
Firstly
, they are too comfortable with their ongoing
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job
that they do not
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want
to do any efforts to
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change
their
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job
.
Secondly
, they don't have
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enough
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skills
to do another
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job
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for
example,
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some
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only
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learnt
about one field due to that even if they
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want
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ot
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their
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job
they cannot.

On the
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other
hand, others
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think
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changing
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job
bring positivity and bring
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life
into your
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lives
.
For example
, if you stick with your
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job
that you don’t like for too long you are going to hate your
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job
and
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life
. You will feel to
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no
to go to work.
Moreover
, if you
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change
your profession you will
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get
to learn something
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different
that
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makes
to excited about your
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job
.
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Hence
therefore
you can earn and enjoy your
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life
at
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sametime
.

In the conclusion, both sides have strong supported argument.
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people
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want
to stick to their
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jobs
for lifetime while others find out fun and excitement in
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changing
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jobs
. For me
personally
, I believe in
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changing
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job
to enjoy my work.
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IELTS essay many people prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life, whereas others prefer to change the type of work.

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  American English
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250 words
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