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Many people nowdays travel abroad for their University education what are the advayand disadvantages?

Many people nowdays travel abroad for their University education what are the advayand disadvantages? 6lNjr

At present many students goes out of country for higher education in university, there are many benifits and drawbacks to study in foreign country, this essay will focus on it in below paragraphs. To begin with, pupils goes to abroad to study because in out of home country there are many merit firstly, they gets world class teaching facilities like, laboratory for doing experiment, library for reading, infrastructure of class and they can get many course related to his own skill. Secondaly, pupils can get higher oppertunity for doing a job with handsome salary as compare to their hometown country. On the other hand, the biggest problem is in many nations people deem in homesickness while in foreign country they are not Lived with family, moreover intially they are not comfortable with weather and also having the financial stress for fees of education. due to this they are started drinking alcohol, smoking etc. Consequently they becomes offtrack. To conclude study in out of home nation has some good points as weel as bad point. in overseas people have hug options for future endeavours wharea have many problems for living there

At present This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 students goes out of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 for higher education in university, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
Possible spelling mistake found.benefits
benifits
 and drawbacks to study in foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
, this essay will focus on it in below paragraphs.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, pupils There isn't usually a preposition before "abroad". Did you mean "goes abroad"?goes abroad
goes to abroad
 to study This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 in out of home You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 there are Possible agreement error. The noun merit seems to be countable; consider using: "many merits".many merits
many merit
firstly
, they The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "get"get
gets
 world This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 teaching facilities like, laboratory for doing experiment, library for reading, infrastructure of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).class, and
class and
 they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 course related to his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
. Possible spelling mistake found.SecondarySecondly
Secondaly
, pupils can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 higher Possible spelling mistake found.opportunity
oppertunity
 for doing a job with handsome salary as compare to their hometown country.

On the other hand
, the biggest problem is in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 nations This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 deem in homesickness while in foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 they are not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
Lived
 with family, moreover
Possible spelling mistake found.initially
intially
 they are not comfortable with weather and also
 having the financial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 for fees of education. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDue
due
 to this they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 drinking alcohol, smoking etc. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Consequently,
Consequently
 they The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "become"become
becomes
 offtrack.

To conclude
 study in out of home nation has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 points as Possible spelling mistake found.wellweekfeelwheelheelkeel
weel
 as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 point. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 overseas This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have hug options for future Possible spelling mistake. 'endeavours' is British English.endeavors
endeavours
Possible spelling mistake found.wharf
wharea
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 problems for living Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthere.there!there?there:there,there;
there