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Many people now live in societies where consumer goods have become cheap. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Many people now live in societies where consumer goods have become cheap. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages? 2blRo

Nowadays, people are residing in such communities where items of daily use have become inexpensive. Although there are far more benefits of this situation, few drowbacks can not be ignored. On the positive side this development has transformed the life of a common man as well as growth in nations can be seen. Firstly ordnary masses can easily afford various items which have made their life more fascinating they can purchase their necessity things such as grocery items and warm clothes are highly accessible. Not only this better life quality can be enjoyed personality since more options of intertainment have entered in the form of cheap internet connection and reduced cost of air traffic. In addition to this, it is true that due to higher demand mass production takes place which results in economic development of the state. Moreover manufacturing units are established which have various jobs for people such as production, packaging, designing, labeling, delivering and so on On the negetive side, there is one major disadvantage of price reduction is that sometimes it declines the quality of product which creates disappointment among buyers. For instance, Chaina made goods are notorious because of their poor quality which are made by unqualified materials as well as prepared by unskilled labour. In conclusion, it is true that there are lots of merits of less expensive things as compared to demerits of this as it gives employment and fascinating life style to those who are living under poverty line as well as to middle class people.

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people
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drowbacks
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ignored
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positive
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life
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man
as well
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seen
. Firstly
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ordnary
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 afford various items which have made their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 more fascinating they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 their necessity things such as grocery items and warm clothes are highly
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only
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life
 quality can be enjoyed
 personality since more options of Possible spelling mistake found.entertainment
intertainment
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entered in the form
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 internet connection and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 cost of air traffic.

In addition
 to this, it is true that due to higher demand mass production takes place which results in economic development of the state. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 manufacturing units are established
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people
 such as production, packaging, designing, labeling, delivering and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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On the Possible spelling mistake found.negative
negetive
 side, there is one major disadvantage of price reduction is that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 it declines the quality of product which creates disappointment among buyers. For instance
, Possible spelling mistake found.ChinaChainChainsChain a
Chaina
 made This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 are notorious This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of their poor quality which are made
 by unqualified materials as well
 as prepared by unskilled Possible spelling mistake. 'labour' is British English.labor
labour
.

In conclusion
, it is true that there are lots of merits of less expensive things as compared to demerits of this as it gives employment and fascinating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 style to those who are living under poverty line as well
 as to middle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. 