It is true that many people now live in societies where consumer commodities have become reasonably priced while this may have several drawbacks, I believe that overall the benefits are more significant.
There are several disadvantages of affordably priced goods. Firstly, cheap commodities are usually shoddy products. Manufactures may cut corners and resort to cheap materials in order to improve their profits. This can make products fall apart after a short period of time. Hence, a myriad of products can be an utter waste of money of people. Secondly, the rise of the purchaser society is a major cause of exacerbating environmental problems. Systems of factories have to operate full capacity in these products and packaging. This can increase exhaust emissions as well as to contribute dramatically to environmental problems such as global warming and greenhouse effects.
Despite the negative effects mentioned above, I contend that the positive consequences of reasonably priced commodities are greater. Primarily, purchasers can buy many more goods than before. This can create jobs for the public and alleviate the rate of unemployment as manufactures produce many distinct goods. when employers are a lucrative income, they can easily cover their bills such as electricity and accommodation. Therefore, they can improve standards of living. In addition, the government can collect enormous taxes. When firms obtain massive profits, they have to pay taxes for the government and the government budget can drastically augment.
In conclusion, although cheap goods have several drawbacks, I believe that reasonable commodities are more likely to have harm impacts on life of many people in societies.
It is true that
many
people
now
live
in societies where consumer
commodities
have become
reasonably
priced while this may have several drawbacks, I believe that
overall
the benefits are more significant.
There are several disadvantages of
affordably
priced
goods
.
Firstly
,
cheap
commodities
are
usually
shoddy
products
. Manufactures may
cut
corners and resort to
cheap
materials in order to
improve
their profits. This can
make
products
fall apart after a short period of time.
Hence
, a myriad of
products
can be an utter waste of money of
people
.
Secondly
, the rise of the purchaser society is a major cause of exacerbating environmental problems. Systems of factories
have to
operate full capacity in these
products
and packaging. This can increase exhaust emissions
as well
as to contribute
dramatically
to environmental problems such as global warming and greenhouse effects.
Despite the
negative
effects mentioned above, I contend that the
positive
consequences of
reasonably
priced
commodities
are greater.
Primarily
, purchasers can
buy
many
more
goods
than
before
. This can create jobs for the public and alleviate the rate of unemployment as manufactures produce
many
distinct
goods
.
when
employers are a lucrative income, they can
easily
cover their bills such as electricity and accommodation.
Therefore
, they can
improve
standards of living.
In addition
, the
government
can collect enormous taxes. When firms obtain massive profits, they
have to
pay taxes for the
government
and the
government
budget can
drastically
augment.
In conclusion
, although
cheap
goods
have several drawbacks, I believe that reasonable
commodities
are more likely to have harm impacts on life of
many
people
in societies.
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