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Many people like the fact that they no longer need to buy newspapers because there are so many free news sources available online. Other people are worried about its consequences and believe that online news sources are not always reliable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people like the fact that they no longer need to buy newspapers because there are so many free news sources available online. Other people are worried about its consequences and believe that online news sources are not always reliable. KGkNw
In today’s technological era, people have started reading news online using different electronics gagets. Accordingly, a group of people emphasises on the ideology that they no longer need to purchase newspaper as they can read free news online. Other people who concered for its outcome and strongly believe that online news usually not authentic. This disquisition elucidates both the perspective and even states my perspicuous convection with utmost proximity. On the one hand, multipal apperent rationales could be taken into consideration for the attribution why it is undeniable that free news available on your fingertips through many sources. The first and formost factor behind this persuasion is conveniency. With a advanced electronic gadgets and fast mobile internet connectivity, news can be read when and where you want. Secondly, the instant news updates will let you know the news with in the seconds of the event. For instance, a earthquake occur in Gujarat on 26th January 2001 in morning with in minutes news about it sprad over the world. On the other hand, the number of people bothered by its upshots and they belive that online news are not faithful all time. Firstly, whatever news spread online was not checked or verified by any authorised person. Secondly, Digital platforms, which stand to profit financially if fake news attracts audiences and advertisers, were initially slow to accept responsibility or take action. For example, during election edited video of Mr. Rahul gandhi used to catch attraction of voters and humiliate him. Lastly, due to plenty of uses of online news sources to achive profitiblity in newspaper business more advertisement was printed in it. As a result, people avoid buying newspapers. To reiterate, eveluating all the prodigious possiblities, to provide an accurate answer for the question, weather to trust on digital media news or rely only on newspaper. In my openion, Unequivocally, reading news from newspaper is faithful source for readers. If reader wants to read news in his or her convenient time then they can consider news on digital plateform which is operated by reputed news firm as a faithful.
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today
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have
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started
reading
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news
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online
using
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electronics
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gagets
.
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, a group of
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people
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emphasises
on the ideology that they no longer need to
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purchase
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newspaper
as they can read free
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news
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online
. Other
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people
who
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concered
for its outcome and
strongly
believe that
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online
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news
usually
not authentic. This disquisition elucidates both the perspective and even states my perspicuous convection with utmost proximity.

On the one hand,
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multipal
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apperent
rationales could
be taken
into consideration for the attribution why it is undeniable that free
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news
available on your fingertips through
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many
sources. The
first
and
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formost
factor behind this persuasion is
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conveniency
. With
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advanced electronic gadgets and
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fast
mobile internet connectivity,
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news
can
be read
when and where you want.
Secondly
, the instant
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news
updates will
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let
you know the
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news
with in the seconds of the
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event
.
For instance
,
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a
earthquake occur in Gujarat on 26th January 2001 in morning with in minutes
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news
about it
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sprad
over the world.

On the other hand
, the number of
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people
bothered by its
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upshots and
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they belive
that
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online
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news
are not faithful all time.
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, whatever
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news
spread
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online
was not
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checked
or verified by any
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authorised
person.
Secondly
, Digital platforms, which stand to profit
financially
if fake
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news
attracts audiences and advertisers, were
initially
slow to accept responsibility or take action.
For example
, during election edited video of Mr. Rahul
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gandhi
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used
to catch attraction of voters and humiliate him.
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, due to
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plenty
of
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uses
of
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online
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news
sources to
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achive
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profitiblity
in
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business more advertisement
was printed
in it.
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,
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people
avoid buying newspapers.

To reiterate,
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all the prodigious
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possiblities
, to provide an accurate answer for the question,
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weather
to trust on digital media
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news
or rely
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only
on
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newspaper
. In my
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,
Unequivocally
, reading
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news
from
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newspaper
is faithful source for readers. If reader wants to read
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news
in
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his or her
convenient time then they can consider
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news
on digital
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plateform
which
is operated
by reputed
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news
firm as a faithful.
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IELTS essay Many people like the fact that they no longer need to buy newspapers because there are so many free news sources available online. Other people are worried about its consequences and believe that online news sources are not always reliable.

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347 words
6.0
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