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do you focus better on your studies or work when you are in a quiet environment or do you prefer to have activity going on around you?

do you focus better on your studies or work when you are in a quiet environment or do you prefer to have activity going on around you? ke9lM

I’m an introvert person, consequently If I want to concentrate on my projects, the environment must be calm. Each distracting factor affect my mind and lower the quality of my work. The sound of TV programs is the most distracting example. I can’t bear it even one minute. Based on these reasons, I prefer to work and study in a calm place. For example, in libraries or at home when mu family members aren’t there.

I’m an introvert person, consequently
 If I want to concentrate on my projects, the environment This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be calm. Each distracting factor affect my mind and lower the quality of my work. The sound of TV programs is the most distracting example. I can’t bear it even one minute. Based on these reasons, I prefer to work and study in a calm place. For example
, in libraries or at home when mu family members aren’t there. 

IELTS essay do you focus better on your studies or work when you are in a quiet environment or do you prefer to have activity going on around you?

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American English

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75 words

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