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Many people keep dogs and cats as companions. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of pet ownership for the animals involved and for the community as a whole.

Many people keep dogs and cats as companions. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of pet ownership for the animals involved and for the community as a whole. pRaBm
Pets are a man’s best friend. Not only do they give a company to a lonely person but also protect the owner as well as the property. However, keeping a pet has several disadvantages ranging from the threat of diseases in the event of non-vaccination to disturbance to the neighbors. Research has proven that the company of a dog or a cat keeps psychological problems such as depression away. These animals keep a person busy and give love and affection that increase overall happiness. These animals also help fight anxiety, inactivity and encourage exercise and playfulness. In many cases, people who did not own a pet reported better blood pressure and lower cholesterol once they owned a pet. Moreover, dogs are extremely possessive of their owner as well as property. They guard the house against any external threat or interference. Thus keeping pets is very helpful for households with children or old people. However, pet ownership is not an easy job. Animals are often the source of many diseases such as asthma. The saliva and fur of a dog or a cat are a source of various diseases. Worse, a bite of a dog which is not properly vaccinated can cause life-threatening diseases as well. Keeping a check on a pet’s diseases is an extremely difficult job. Furthermore, dogs are sometimes a source of disturbance during the night. Many people have reported dog howling and barking at night as a severe form of stress. In conclusion, despite several drawbacks of keeping a pet, animals such as a dog are extremely beneficial in dealing with stresses and insecurities of a modern lifestyle. They are not only good friends but also an excellent protector from any possible threat
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Pets
are a
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man
’s best friend. Not
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only
do they give a
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company
to a lonely person
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but
also
protect the owner
as well
as the property.
However
, keeping a pet has several disadvantages ranging from the threat of
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diseases
in the
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event
of non-vaccination to disturbance to the neighbors.

Research has proven that the
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company
of a
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dog
or a cat
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keeps
psychological problems such as depression away. These
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animals
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keep
a person busy and give
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love
and affection that increase
overall
happiness. These
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animals
also
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help
fight anxiety, inactivity and encourage exercise and playfulness. In
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many
cases,
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people
who did not
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own
a pet reported better blood pressure and lower cholesterol once they
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owned
a pet.
Moreover
,
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dogs
are
extremely
possessive of their owner
as well
as property. They guard the
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house
against any external threat or interference.
Thus
keeping
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pets
is
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very
helpful for households with children or
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old
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people
.
However
, pet ownership is not an easy job.
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Animals
are
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often
the source of
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many
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diseases
such as asthma. The saliva and fur of a
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dog
or a cat are a source of various
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diseases
. Worse, a bite of a
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dog
which is not
properly
vaccinated can cause life-threatening
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diseases
as well
. Keeping a
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check
on a pet’s
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diseases
is an
extremely
difficult job.
Furthermore
,
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dogs
are
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sometimes
a source of disturbance during the night.
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people
have reported
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dog
howling and barking at night as a severe form of
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stress
.

In conclusion
, despite several drawbacks of keeping a pet,
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animals
such as a
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dog
are
extremely
beneficial in dealing with
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stresses
and insecurities of a modern lifestyle. They are not
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only
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good
friends
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but
also
an excellent protector from any possible
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threat

IELTS essay Many people keep dogs and cats as companions. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of pet ownership for the animals involved and for the community as a whole.

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