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many people having difficulty to maintaing a healthy diet . what are the causes of this problem ? how could it be solved

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Nowadays everybody has dream to fit and eat nutrioius diet. But they faces plethora of difficulty to maintaining a healthy diet. There are many causes because of this they can not follow his/her diet plans. Firstly, To prepare a healthy food the person have to reserve time for diet preparation some people are able to find the time from his/her busy schedule others are not so people replacing the healthy diet with processed and preserved food because it takes around 5-10 minute to prepare and it is delicious to eat. For Example: People who are studying in college or institution in the morning and work at night they have less time to rest so they feel better to used canned food. Secondly, Those people who started follow healty diet plan after few days the fed with food because number of options are less as compare to unhealthy food. For instance: my cousin started a strict diet plan which was made by dietitian after 15 days she had craving for bakery and junk food items. She dropped his healthy diet plan and bake to regular diet plan. Moreover, To follow this healthy diet you need to make your mind you can do it and only follow my diet plan. To continue your diet plan you need to cut down the sugar because when we eat sugar and other subsitute like honey and stevia these things make you feel hungry. If you craving for sugary item eat fruits, nut and seed. Having a busy schedule make your food at night take with your office and college. Ther are many recipes which we donot cook like overnight oats, chia pudding all are very easy take 4-5 minute to prepare. On conclusion, if anyone can find 30 minutes in a day for own. They can prepare three meals according to our diet plan. In other words people have to control on over mind and if they having craving for unhealthy food try to avoid.
Nowadays everybody has dream to fit and
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nutrioius
diet.
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they
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faces
plethora of difficulty to maintaining a
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healthy
diet. There are
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many
causes
because of this
they can not
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follow
his/her diet plans.

Firstly
, To prepare a
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healthy
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food
the person
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have to
reserve time for diet preparation
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some
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people
are able to find the time from his/her busy schedule others are not
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so
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people
replacing the
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healthy
diet with processed and preserved
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food
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because
it takes around 5-10 minute to prepare and it is delicious to
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eat
.
For Example
:
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who are studying in college or institution in the morning and work at night they have less time to rest
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so
they feel better to
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used
canned food.

Secondly
, Those
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people
who
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started
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healty
diet
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after few days the fed with
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because
number of options are less
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as
compare to unhealthy
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.
For instance
: my cousin
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started
a strict diet
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plan
which
was made
by dietitian after 15 days she had craving for bakery and junk
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food
items. She dropped his
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healthy
diet
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plan
and bake to regular diet plan.

Moreover
, To
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follow
this
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healthy
diet you need to
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make
your mind you can do it and
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only
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follow
my diet
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. To continue your diet
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you need to
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cut
down the sugar
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when we
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sugar and other
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subsitute
like honey and stevia these things
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make
you feel hungry. If
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you craving
for sugary item
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fruits, nut and seed. Having a busy schedule
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your
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food
at night take with your office and college.
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Ther are
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many
recipes which we
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cook like overnight oats, chia pudding all are
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easy take 4-5 minute to prepare.

On conclusion, if anyone can find 30 minutes in a day for
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own
. They can prepare three meals according to our diet
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plan
.
In other words
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people
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have to
control on over mind and if
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they having
craving for unhealthy
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food
try to avoid.
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IELTS essay many people having difficulty to maintaing a healthy diet. what are the causes of this problem? how could it be solved

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
330 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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