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Many people claim that sperate schools are benefical for students but others think that combined are best.So,discuss both the views?

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It is though by many of that sperate school is benefical for male and females undergraduates. on the countrary, other consider that coeducation is more fruitful for graduates. Both the views are going to be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. The first school of thought believes that having discrete schools for both is considered to be a less distracting in a conservative society, it is often assumed that studying in sperate schools for males and females braces to focusing on studies that they will less distraction towards the opposite genders. For instance, Saudia Arabia was a gender specific schools is considered to have a decreasing rate of sexual assault per year, only 6 cases reported by 2019. Despite this, sperate schools for both males and females students cause of communicate gap in practical life owing to the negligible interaction between both males and females students. The second views contradicts the above given statement males and females students study in coeducation will starting respectful for each other and it will help them to improve mannerism between both genders as well as enhance confidence to tackle and downs of life. For instance, a recent survey conducted by national unversity, ladies in karachi felt secure while interacting with male colleagues. Who had to graduated coeducation study system. It can be infered that both the views and substances but in my prospective combined schools are males and females students is necessary to improve interaction is in prosperous society, however, teacher play a substantial role in supervising and teaching students. How to be humble and respectful to the opposite genders.
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undergraduates.
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first
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assumed that studying in
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braces to focusing on studies that they will less distraction towards the opposite genders.
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Arabia was a
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gender specific
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schools
is considered
to have a decreasing rate of sexual assault per year,
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only
6 cases reported by 2019. Despite this,
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schools
for both
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and
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students
cause of communicate gap in practical life owing to the negligible interaction between both
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males
and
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students
. The second views
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study in coeducation will
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unversity
, ladies in
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karachi
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that both the views and substances
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interaction is in prosperous society,
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. How to be humble and respectful to the opposite genders.
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IELTS essay Many people claim that sperate schools are benefical for students but others think that combined are best. So,

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