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ideas on how you could cut down on energy use in your own life

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I think I could do better. Since the technology has been more advanced, I can purchase energy-efficient appliances instead of using the old ones. For example, energy-efficient clothes washers consume 25% less energy and 45% less water than conventional ones, whereas energy-efficient refrigerators use only 9% less energy. Instead of lower the standards of living in order to save the planet, we can educate people about environmental awareness. Since people waste a lot of energy on some needless electrical appliance, we can save energy through education. Moreover, the development of science and technology brings benefits to energy saving. For example, electric cars reduce pollution than traditional cars do. Therefore, the government should encourage innovative invention.

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