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Many people chose to study in a university. What is the advantages of studying in a university

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After graduating from high school, each people have their own choice. Some person go to work right away or learn apprenticeship. But I chose to attend college at Dong Nai university. In my opinion, Dong Nai university is a good environment for student to study during the university period. The rooms at school are fitted with all modern conveniences and facilities to make student studies easier. In addition, the school has a team of enthusiastic teachers and have a lot of experience in teaching, they will help students develop all the capabilities and things needed for future work. Beside that, the school also has a favorable location where the economy is developing, so students can easily interact with the outside to develop soft skills, which is essential for future work. In short, Dong Nai university is a good environment for student to study and equip necessary skills for future jobs.
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IELTS essay Many people chose to study in a university. What is the advantages of studying in a university

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