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Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in todays world and should bo closed.

Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in todays world and should bo closed. MMJDQ

Nowadays more and more people think that zoos are no longer of interest to people today and should be closed. Furthermore, many people think that only wild animals divide in the zoo. Well, to my mind, first of all zoos can cause deasese in the place. One example is if the zoos are located in a rural area or where houses are located in large numbers, this can cause very big problems. If an infectious desease develops in the jars, it can spread to humans. One more example is that if you live in the city near the zoos when at night you hear a lot of noise made by animals or when you wake up in the morning you breathe in polluted air, not fresh air. So, my answer is that animals can cause the same number of problems in cities and people. I think zoos should be closed to prevent such problems from multiplying.

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