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Each year,the crime rate incrieases

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The illegal acts rise every year. It seems to me that the causes of crime are utilize of illegal drugs and objects can be easily obtained. These activities include not only just bombing, gun fight which once used to be more popular criminal activity but today it also include harrasment, rape and etc. In addition this, social relations are can be dangerous and this can result to crime. At the same time, the technological advancement has been made in almost every field. For this, it is very easy to detect criminals nowadays. Yet, the crime rate is increasing day by day. By and large, misuse of technological advancement and lack of justice are resposible for this increasing rate. In order to prevent criminal activity, countries should make their law more strict and justice should be served in a short period of time. In short, this rise of criminal activity can be prevented by provide strict laws. In additional, the law enforcement officers should never hesitate to punish a criminal and do not make a short time flogging ignoring the threats which come from the intense contacs of that criminal. The juridiction producers should be served as soon as possible. Sometimes it takes a decade to solve a problem and this is consequence with to resume their work of criminals. In my view, police officers and also judges should be aware of the consequences of this delay in justice. I reckon that everything depends on the judges. If they are careful in their decision and make the right choice, it makes other criminals to care of the laws in a country. In conclusion causes of increasing rate of crimes are lot, as well as solutions are also possible if we manage our systsem in a way that will punish the criminals in a short period of time.
The illegal acts rise every year. It seems to me that the causes of
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crime
are
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utilize
of illegal drugs and objects can be
easily
obtained. These
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activities
include not
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just
bombing, gun fight which once
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used
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criminal
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activity
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but
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today
it
also
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harrasment
, rape
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.

In
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addition
this, social relations are can be
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dangerous
and this can result to
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crime
. At the same time, the technological advancement has
been made
in almost every field. For this, it is
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very
easy to detect
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criminals
nowadays.
Yet
, the
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crime
rate is increasing day by day. By and large, misuse of technological advancement and lack of justice are
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resposible
for this increasing rate. In order to
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prevent
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criminal
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activity
, countries should
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make
their
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law
more strict and justice should
be served
in a
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short
period of time.

In
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short
, this rise of
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criminal
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activity
can be
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prevented
by provide strict
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laws
.
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In
additional, the
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law
enforcement officers should never hesitate to punish a
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criminal
and do not
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make
a
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short
time flogging ignoring the threats which
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come
from the intense
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contacs
of that
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criminal
. The
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juridiction
producers should
be served
as
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soon
as possible.
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Sometimes
it takes a decade to solve a problem and this is
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consequence with
to resume their work of
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criminals
. In my view, police officers and
also
judges should be aware of the consequences of this delay in justice. I reckon that everything depends on the judges. If they are careful in their decision and
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make
the right choice, it
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makes
other
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criminals
to care of the
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laws
in a country.

In conclusion
causes of increasing rate of
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crimes
are lot,
as well
as solutions are
also
possible if we manage our
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systsem
in a way that will punish the
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criminals
in a
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short
period of time.
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IELTS essay Each year, the crime rate incrieases

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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