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Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.1

Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects. with this viewpoint? v. 1
Due to a highly compatible environment, today's students have been trying hard to get as much knowledge as possible. That is why it is believed that a wide list of subjects should be included in the university curriculum, while others opine that only specific subjects are matter. I agree up to the point that the wide spectrum of educated people has, the more creative and interesting they are so intelligent differentiation is quite important. However, only a thorough studying of a certain subject differs an amateur from a true professional. One of the main reason why I consider learning subjects variety instead of only specific ones, is that the world we live in is changeable. In other words, one can hardly ever predict what will happen to them tomorrow and, as a result, to feel save and comfort one should have a great range of knowledge, skills and experience to adjust to changes of surroundings. One clear example of it is mine. Although my major occupation is project management, I was keen on languages and, consequently, have been learning English and French since the time I was a student. Then when I had made a decision to immigrate to Canada my knowledge helped me and saved my time and money. To sum up, our brain has been created to get as much information as possible so limiting ourselves with the only one subject is a big mistake, which can lead to negative circumstances if something is changed in one's career plans.
Due to a
highly
compatible environment,
today
's students have been trying
hard
to
get
as much knowledge as possible.
That is
why it
is believed
that a wide list of
subjects
should
be included
in the university curriculum, while others opine that
only
specific
subjects
are matter. I
agree
up to the point that the wide spectrum of educated
people
has, the more creative and interesting they are
so
intelligent differentiation is quite
important
.
However
,
only
a thorough studying of a certain
subject
differs an amateur from a true professional.

One of the main reason why I consider learning
subjects
variety
instead
of
only
specific ones, is that the world we
live
in is changeable.
In other words
, one can hardly ever predict what will happen to them tomorrow and,
as a result
, to feel
save
and comfort one should have a great range of knowledge,
skills
and experience to adjust to
changes
of surroundings. One
clear
example of it is mine. Although my major occupation is project management, I was keen on languages and,
consequently
, have been learning English and French since the time I was a student. Then when I had made a decision to immigrate to Canada my knowledge
helped
me and saved my time and money.

To sum up, our brain has
been created
to
get
as much information as possible
so
limiting ourselves with the
only
one
subject
is a
big
mistake, which can lead to
negative
circumstances if something is
changed
in one's career plans.
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9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects. with this viewpoint? v. 1

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  American English
3 paragraphs
251 words
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