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Where there is a will there is a way, the story of a thirsty crow.

Where there is a will there is a way, the story of a thirsty crow. E7Dyr
Once upon a time there lived a crow and it was very thirsty. The crow looked for water but it did not find even a drop of water any where. The crow kept on searching and finally found a pot containing some water in it. The water level in the pot is so low that the crow could not reach to drink. Now the crow started to think on how it can reach the water so that it could drink. After a while an idea flashed its mind and the crow started picking some stones with its beak and dropped them in water. Slowly the water level began to rise and the crow continued to put stones until it could reach the water in the pot. The crow happily drank the water and it flew away. From this story we can learn that where there is a will there is a way.
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and it flew away. From this story we can learn that where there is a will there is a way.

IELTS essay Where there is a will there is a way, the story of a thirsty crow.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
152 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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