It is a common belief that social media sites such as Facebook, Twitter and Instagram are negatively affecting people. While this is true to a certain extent, I am of the opinion that social media can be highly advantageous to use. This essay will discuss how merits of using such sites overrule the drawbacks.
Firstly, human beings are social by nature and there is a strong need to be connected with other individuals such as family members and friends. Most of us are busy with our careers and studies, so cannot meet our loved ones in person, yet we can be in contact through the internet. For instance, when I was on a youth exchange program in the UK, I felt very homesick and with the help of whatsapp I was always in touch with my family in India. This amazing connectivity that is provided by such sites is a boon in such cases.
Secondly, such sites are educative and entertaining. For example, there are several DIY projects, room makeovers, shopping hauls and recipes that can be shared and watched all over the world. So we can cook up an italian dish or learn a new language irrespective of where we live.
In conclusion, these sites should be used responsibly and there must be adherence to the law that requires individuals and groups to maintain decorum and not abuse or degrade any person or community. There might be certain negative aspects like misleading information or dare-devil acts propogated on the internet but with adequate vigilance by parents and government such incidents can be avoided. So, clearly the numerous benefits prevail over the demerits of social networking sites.
It is a common belief that
social
media
sites
such as Facebook, Twitter and Instagram are
negatively
affecting
people
. While this is true to a certain extent, I am of the opinion that
social
media can be
highly
advantageous to
use
. This essay will discuss how merits of using such
sites
overrule the drawbacks.
Firstly
, human beings are
social
by nature and there is a strong need to
be connected
with other individuals such as family members and friends. Most of us are busy with our careers and studies,
so
cannot
meet
our
loved
ones in person,
yet
we can be in contact through the internet.
For instance
, when I was on a youth exchange program in the UK, I felt
very
homesick and with the
help
of
whatsapp
I was always in touch with my family in India. This amazing connectivity that
is provided
by such
sites
is a boon in such cases.
Secondly
, such
sites
are educative and entertaining.
For example
, there are several DIY projects, room makeovers, shopping hauls and recipes that can
be shared
and
watched
all over the world.
So
we can cook up an
italian
dish or learn a new language irrespective of where we
live
.
In conclusion
, these
sites
should be
used
responsibly
and there
must
be adherence to the law that requires individuals and groups to maintain decorum and not abuse or degrade any person or community. There might be certain
negative
aspects like misleading information or dare-devil acts
propogated
on the internet
but
with adequate vigilance by parents and
government
such incidents can
be avoided
.
So
,
clearly
the numerous benefits prevail over the demerits of
social
networking
sites
.
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10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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