Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. v.3
Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. v. 3
Instead of being conducted by private companies, important scientific research must be managed and administered by the governments, according to the opinions of many. I personally believe that private companies should be given their own freedom in doing research, but with sufficient and proper monitoring from the government.
On one hand, it is true that scientific research should not be only conducted by the government. The main reason is that the scope of scientific research is diverse and wide, and private companies could cover up some research which is not carried out by the governments. Many private institutions or individuals' discoveries are useful for the humanity, as we can learn from the past. For example, Thomas Alva Edison was an individual inventor who has greatly contributed to the world with his inventions such as the bulb light, motion pictures, phonograph and so on. We should notice that the invention was not the main focus of the government’s research during that time, and thanks to Edison we have electric light today.
On the other hand, although private companies are given the right to do scientific research, they must be strictly monitored by the governments. They must be controlled, as some of them might be doing it for their monetary gain or for destructive weapons. For example, some companies might focus on developing biochemical weapons, and it could threaten the world peace. It is the governments’ job to prevent and block these kinds of research.
In conclusion, I do not agree that scientific research should only be conducted by the governments. It is a fact that the scope of scientific research is huge. Therefore private companies should be allowed in doing research. However, I do agree the research that is done by private companies must be reviewed, and monitored by the governments in order to avoid any misappropriation.
Instead
of
being conducted
by
private
companies
,
important
scientific
research
must
be managed
and administered by the
governments
, according to the opinions of
many
. I
personally
believe that
private
companies
should be
given
their
own
freedom in doing
research
,
but
with sufficient and proper monitoring from the
government
.
On one hand, it is true that
scientific
research
should not be
only
conducted by the
government
. The main reason is that the scope of
scientific
research
is diverse and wide, and
private
companies
could cover up
some
research
which is not carried out by the
governments
.
Many
private
institutions or individuals' discoveries are useful for the humanity, as we can learn from the past.
For example
, Thomas Alva Edison was an individual inventor who has
greatly
contributed to the world with his inventions such as the bulb light, motion pictures, phonograph and
so
on. We should notice that the invention was not the main focus of the
government’s
research
during that time, and thanks to Edison we have electric light
today
.
On the other hand
, although
private
companies
are
given
the right to do
scientific
research
, they
must
be
strictly
monitored by the
governments
. They
must
be controlled
, as
some
of them might be doing it for their monetary gain or for destructive weapons.
For example
,
some
companies
might focus on developing biochemical weapons, and it could threaten the world peace. It is the
governments’
job to
prevent
and block these kinds of research.
In conclusion
, I do not
agree
that
scientific
research
should
only
be conducted
by the
governments
. It is a fact that the scope of
scientific
research
is huge.
Therefore
private
companies
should be
allowed
in doing
research
.
However
, I do
agree
the
research
that
is done
by
private
companies
must
be reviewed
, and monitored by the
governments
in order to avoid any misappropriation.
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