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Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away” culture because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. v.2

Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away” culture because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. v. 2
Nowadays people produce more waste than ever, as they are accustomed to a “throw-away” lifestyle. And it’s become worst as they generate wastes which are difficult to be disposed of. I personally agree with the statement and the following essay will explain it in details. To begin with, as the world economic has developed, people generate more waste each year. With the mass industrialisation, costs of producing products such as the plastic bottle or disposable diapers are getting lower than ever. As a result, lots of people prefer to use these kinds of products, as they believe that these items are more efficient and hygiene. However, they do not realise that these products have a catastrophic effect on the environment. It is very difficult to recycle these items, as it requires for more than a century to dispose of them. Consequently, people require more landfills these days which will reduce the number of green areas. However, to resolve the issue, we could change the habits of purchasing non-environmentally friendly products. For example, instead of buying mineral water that is packed in the plastic bottle, we could use a glass bottle that can be repeatedly used. In terms of recycling, the glass bottle is easier than the plastic one and safer for the human’s health as well. It has been reported that plastic bottles could cause cancers and other kinds of serious diseases. Another example would be to use a paper bag or a permanent bag as a substitution of plastic bags. By changing these kinds of lifestyle, it is hoped that we could reduce the number of non-disposable waste in the area. In conclusion, it is undeniable that people generate more waste these days, as they have a “throw-away” habit. And it gets worst, as many of the waste are non-disposable. I strongly agree with the statement, and we should change this negative lifestyle immediately. We could start by changing our lifestyle from using disposable items to consuming a friendly environment one, and hoped that the number of waste would be reduced gradually.
Nowadays
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people
produce more
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waste
than ever, as they
are accustomed
to a “throw-away”
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lifestyle
. And it’s become worst as they generate
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wastes
which are difficult to
be disposed
of. I
personally
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agree
with the statement and the following essay will
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explain
it in
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details
.

To
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begin
with, as the world economic has developed,
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people
generate more
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waste
each year. With the mass
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industrialisation
, costs of producing
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products
such as the
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plastic
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bottle
or disposable diapers are getting lower than ever.
As a result
, lots of
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people
prefer to
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use
these kinds of
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products
, as they believe that these items are more efficient and hygiene.
However
, they do not
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realise
that these
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products
have a catastrophic effect on the environment. It is
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very
difficult to recycle these items, as it requires for more than a century to dispose of them.
Consequently
,
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people
require more landfills these days which will
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reduce
the number of green areas.

However
, to resolve the issue, we could
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change
the habits of purchasing non-
environmentally
friendly
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products
.
For example
,
instead
of buying mineral water that
is packed
in the
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plastic
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bottle
, we could
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use
a glass
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bottle
that can be
repeatedly
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used
. In terms of recycling, the glass
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bottle
is easier than the
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plastic
one and safer for the human’s health
as well
. It has
been reported
that
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plastic
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bottles
could cause cancers and other kinds of serious diseases. Another example would be to
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use
a paper bag or a permanent bag as a substitution of
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plastic
bags. By changing these kinds of
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lifestyle
, it
is hoped
that we could
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reduce
the number of non-disposable
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waste
in the area.

In conclusion
, it is undeniable that
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people
generate more
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waste
these days, as they have a “throw-away” habit. And it
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gets
worst, as
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many
of the
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waste
are non-disposable. I
strongly
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agree
with the statement, and we should
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change
this
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negative
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lifestyle
immediately. We could
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start
by changing our
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lifestyle
from using disposable items to consuming a friendly environment one, and hoped that the number of
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waste
would be
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reduced
gradually
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away” culture because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
343 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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