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Many people believe that lying is always wrong, no matter what the situation. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that lying is always wrong, no matter what the situation. KYeWw
Since the early age, we have taught that lying is wrong and hurts people including ourselves. Moreover, we also have educated that it is better to accept the consequences of my actions than to lie. However, the more we grow up, the more we know about using of lying because telling the truth cannot always solve the problem. From my point of view, some lying is acceptable, some is not. It depends upon what purposes that make people tell lies. The first point to note is that although telling lie is easy to get things in the short period of time, it will create a bad impression on the next generation as well as it does not give any benefit on long way. For example, if you tell some lies to the children such as smoking doesn't effect on everyone around, what will they learn in their future? It is dangerous for us to aware of wrong way because of adult. Another point I would like to mention is that if we always cheat others many times, one day our lie will befall upon us and will lose prestige in our relationships. The story telling about a shepherdrearing his sheep is typical example. He cheats villagers many times that there was wolf on the hill. When they ran to save him but found no wolf, they became angry with him. And then when the wolf really came, no one botheredhim. Finally, the wolf attacked his sheep and also killed him. It was due to his own sin that he got the kill. On the other hand, in some situations, telling the truth leads to more bad than good. So with this lying is used will make others in the relationship feel better about themselves. Women these days are very self-conscious, and do not want to hear the truth that they are not as attractive as they used to be. When we say things like this, the relationship most likely will not last that long. Besides, we need to lie because it can help others more comfortable and motivate to continue to do a job better. For instance, teachers in the classes often praise the students even if they have not offered correct answers. Instead of criticizing them, the teachers use the acclaim to encourage the students to find out the right ones. I think this kind of lies in the school often regards as one of the positive educational methods and helps students have a good result in studying. In conclusion, everything always has two sides, so we will choose a best solution in each of different situations in order to deal with the problem appropriately. And some cases, people are easily to accept the others telling lies when it have kind purposes and reflect to the good result
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lying
is
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people
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have educated that it is better to accept the consequences of my actions than to
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lie
.
However
, the more we grow up, the more we know about using of
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lying
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because
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the truth cannot always solve the problem. From my point of view,
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some
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lying
is acceptable,
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some
is not. It depends upon what purposes that
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people
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tell
lies.

The
first
point to note is that although
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telling
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is easy to
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get
things in the short period of time, it will create a
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bad
impression on the
next
generation
as well
as it does not give any benefit on long way.
For example
, if you
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tell
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some
lies to the children such as smoking doesn't effect on everyone around, what will they learn in their future? It is
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dangerous
for us to aware of
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wrong
way
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because
of adult. Another point I would like to mention is that if we always cheat others
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many
times, one day our
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lie
will befall upon us and will lose prestige in our relationships. The story
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telling
about a
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shepherdrearing
his sheep is typical example. He cheats villagers
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many
times that there was
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wolf
on the hill. When they ran to save him
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but
found no
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wolf
, they became angry with him. And then when the
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really
came, no one
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botheredhim
.
Finally
, the
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attacked his sheep and
also
killed him. It was due to his
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own
sin that he
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got
the kill.

On the
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hand, in
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some
situations,
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the truth leads to more
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bad
than
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with this
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is
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will
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make
others in the relationship feel better about themselves. Women these days are
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very
self-conscious, and do not want to hear the truth that they are not as attractive as they
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used
to be. When we say things like this, the relationship most likely will not last that long.
Besides
, we need to
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lie
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because
it can
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help
others more comfortable and motivate to continue to do a job better.
For instance
, teachers in the classes
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often
praise the students even if they have not offered correct answers.
Instead
of criticizing them, the teachers
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use
the acclaim to encourage the students to find out the right ones. I
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think
this kind of lies in the school
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regards as one of the
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positive
educational methods and
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helps
students have a
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good
result in studying.

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, everything always has two sides,
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we will choose
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a
best solution in each of
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different
situations in order to deal with the problem
appropriately
. And
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some
cases,
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people
are
easily
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lies when it
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have
kind purposes and reflect to the
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good
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IELTS essay Many people believe that lying is always wrong, no matter what the situation.

Essay
  American English
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468 words
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