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lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance.what problems does this shortage cause?

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the most important habit people should follow is protecting water from pollution How many cigarretes, plastic bottles and cartons has anyone found inside a the sea or a lake. If cas every person could be careful and make a second thought before throwing them inside the water, the amount of fresh water worshe would't be a great concern. another important try that everyone should make on his own is the amount of water they spend everyday, . For example, when someone is washing their hands the tap shouldn't be on the whole time. Someone, would think that this isn΄t an enough amount of water and won't make any change. However, if this water is added the result would be huge and and could be an easy solution for overcoming the stated problem. Overall, it's really important humans from their young age leam that fresh water is one of the most valuable things nature gives to people for free. This way, they will respect it and the above mentioned problems will be minimized.
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is protecting
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from pollution How
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cigarretes
, plastic bottles and cartons

has anyone

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found
inside
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a the
sea or a lake. If
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cas every
person could be careful and
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before
throwing them inside the
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, the amount of fresh water

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try that everyone should
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on his
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is the amount of
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they spend
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on the whole
time. Someone, would

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is
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added
the result would be huge
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humans from their

young age
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that fresh
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is one of the most valuable
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for free. This way, they will respect it and the above mentioned problems will
be minimized
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IELTS essay lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. what problems does this shortage cause?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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