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Many people believe that it is good idea to have dress code at work place. do you agree? v.1

Many people believe that it is good idea to have dress code at work place. do you agree? v. 1
The issue of uniformity in dressing among workers has become a hot topic of discussion in our society today. A vast majority are of the opinion that having a formal acceptable attire in the work settings is good. From an individual perspective, I absolutely agree with this belief. This essay will argue why it is important to have a specific mode of clothing to offices. Firstly, having a dress code at work creates a good customer's impression. This is because appearance shows the manner. Clients are able to detect the seriousness and how business minded the workers are unlike when they appear casually in their place of work. For example, according to a research carried out among middle-aged men in Nigeria about what made them stick to their first Bank of choice, it was revealed, one third of them returned after their initial encounter because of how neatly and smart the workers appeared. As a result, clients are able to see the company in a good light. Secondly, it creates uniformity among the employees. Following a specific mode of dressing will create a feeling of equality among the workers and will as well increase their sense of belonging which can make in turn boost their self esteem. For instance, colleagues at work will not have to worry about their appearance since they are all obeying a particular code of conduct guiding their dressing. Thereby eliminating completely the feeling of inferiority that may be associated with how they dress. In conclusion, personally, I ultimately believe it is good for workers to have a dress code. This essay argued that dress code to work is crucial, because it allow the customers to form a good opinion about the organization and it create uniformity among the workers.
The issue of uniformity in dressing among
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workers
has become a hot topic of discussion in our society
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today
. A vast majority are of the opinion that having a formal acceptable attire in the
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work
settings is
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good
. From an individual perspective, I
absolutely
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agree
with this belief. This essay will argue why it is
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important
to have a specific mode of clothing to offices.

Firstly
, having a dress code at
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work
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creates
a
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good
customer's impression. This is
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because
appearance
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shows
the manner. Clients are able to detect the seriousness and how business minded the
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workers
are unlike when they appear
casually
in their place of
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work
.
For example
, according to
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a research
carried out among middle-aged
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men
in Nigeria about what made them stick to their
first
Bank of choice, it
was revealed
, one third of them returned after their initial encounter
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because
of how
neatly
and smart the
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workers
appeared.
As a result
, clients are able to
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see
the
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company
in a
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good
light.

Secondly
, it
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creates
uniformity among the employees. Following a specific mode of dressing will
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create
a feeling of equality among the
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workers
and will
as well
increase their sense of belonging which can
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make
in turn boost their
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self esteem
.
For instance
, colleagues at
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work
will not
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have to
worry about their appearance since they are all obeying a particular code of conduct guiding their dressing. Thereby eliminating completely the feeling of inferiority that may
be associated
with how they dress.

In conclusion
,
personally
, I
ultimately
believe it is
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good
for
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workers
to have a dress code. This essay argued that dress code to
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work
is crucial,
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because
it
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allow
the customers to form a
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good
opinion about the organization and it
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create
uniformity among the
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workers
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Many people believe that it is good idea to have dress code at work place. do you agree? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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