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Many people believe that in the future, modern technology can take the role of teachers in the class. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many people believe that in the future, modern technology can take the role of teachers in the class. with this opinion? 0AEp5
In this modern era, the appearance of automation is a topic which people are interested and concerned about. While i believe that taking aspect of teachers in the class is possible, i also support the idea that the teachers still have the most functions. On the one hand, in my opinion, modern machinery cannot take the appearance of teachers in class because of paying high cost and lacking some skills of human. It is not can be denied that in order to buy modern automation, the schools have to pay a large amount of money. Consequently, the fee of the series will increase significantly, so some young people are not able to afford. Moreover, students will not have experiments of life which only teachers have, because machinery such as robots which are programed. On the other hand, from my point of view, both information processing and avoiding interruption, are reasons why modern automation can replace the function of teachers in. It is obvious that it can quickly receive and process information which students want to know. In additions, the quality program of students will be guaranteed because its tenacity when teachers can not maintain the program. As a result, not only can students get more knowledge, but their development quality has also improved. In conclusion, i agree that the part of teachers in the class is replaced by modern automation because of information processing and avoiding interruption, i am also for the idea that the character of teachers still is most importance due to the high cost of machinery and no experimentedments as human
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era, the appearance of
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automation
is a topic which
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people
are interested
and concerned about. While
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believe that taking aspect of
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teachers
in the
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class
is possible,
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i
also
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idea
that the
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teachers
still
have the most functions.

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modern
machinery cannot take the appearance of
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teachers
in
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class
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because
of paying high cost and lacking
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some
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skills
of human. It is not can
be denied
that in order to
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buy
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modern
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automation
, the schools
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have to
pay a large amount of money.
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, the fee of the series will increase
significantly
,
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so
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some
young
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people
are not able to afford.
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,
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students
will not have experiments of life which
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teachers
have,
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because
machinery such as robots which are
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programed
.

On the other hand
, from my point of view, both information processing and avoiding interruption, are reasons why
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modern
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automation
can replace the function of
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teachers
in. It is obvious that it can
quickly
receive and process information which
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students
want to know. In additions, the quality program of
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students
will
be guaranteed
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because
its tenacity when
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teachers
can not maintain the program.
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, not
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students
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get
more knowledge,
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but
their development quality has
also
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improved
.

In conclusion
,
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i
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agree
that the part of
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teachers
in the
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class
is replaced
by
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modern
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automation
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because
of information processing and avoiding interruption,
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i
am
also
for the
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idea
that the character of
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still
is most importance due to the high cost of machinery and no
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experimentedments
as human
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IELTS essay Many people believe that in the future, modern technology can take the role of teachers in the class. with this opinion?

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