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Task: Life was simpler without somuch of technology.How far you agree.?

Task: Life was simpler without somuch of technology. How far you agree. ? BJwYm
Before the technologies took over the world, life was more easier in all ways. I partly agree with this statement as there are many benefits of the same. Technology is the application of scientific knowledge in practical ways to make our routine chores easier. Since last few years, usage of technology had exponentially increased as well as affected our daily life. We have started to rely up on technology for our every needs. It is because technology had impacted the lives by reducing the physical exertion and time. In this busy life, time is very important and reliance towards technology helps to save time. We cannot say completely that technology had made our life more complicated. Because there are pros and cons to this. We cannot think of a life with out mobile, Television, ATM, etc nowadays. All of these are the results of technology. Even though automation had made our work easier, many people think that life before the automation was more simpler. The basic idea of this thinking is that machinery had affected the family time and kids too. In older days the important way of entertainment was outdoor games, moreover each and every household chores were done manually, but now these are done with the help of sophisticated technologies and kids depend more on electronic gadgets for entertainment as well as learning purpose. This is affecting the health of people as due to lack of physical exertion. Apart from this, automation is adding to the pollution and thereby global warming. In conclusion, heart without the influence of machinery is still considered peahealthier, even thougheventhough there are many gains from automation
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Before
the
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technologies
took over the world,
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life
was
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more easier
in
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all ways
. I partly
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agree
with this statement as there are
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many
benefits of the same.

Technology is the application of scientific knowledge in practical ways to
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make
our routine chores easier. Since last few years, usage of
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technology
had
exponentially
increased
as well
as
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affected
our daily
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life
. We have
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started
to rely up on
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technology
for our every needs. It is
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because
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technology
had impacted the
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lives
by reducing the physical exertion and
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time
. In this busy
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life
,
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time
is
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very
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important
and reliance towards
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technology
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helps
to save
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time
. We cannot say completely that
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technology
had made our
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life
more complicated.
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Because
there are pros and cons to this. We cannot
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think
of a
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life
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with out
mobile, Television, ATM, etc nowadays. All of these are the results of technology.

Even though
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automation
had made our work easier,
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many
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people
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think
that
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life
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before
the
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automation
was
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more simpler
. The basic
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idea
of this thinking is that machinery had
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affected
the family
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time
and kids too. In older days the
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important
way of entertainment was outdoor games,
moreover
each and every household chores
were done
manually
,
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but
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now
these
are done
with the
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help
of sophisticated
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technologies
and kids depend more on electronic gadgets for entertainment
as well
as learning purpose. This is affecting the health of
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people
as due to lack of physical exertion. Apart from this,
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automation
is adding to the pollution and thereby global warming.

In conclusion
, heart without the influence of machinery is
still
considered
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peahealthier
, even
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thougheventhough
there are
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many
gains from
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automation
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IELTS essay Task: Life was simpler without somuch of technology. How far you agree. ?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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