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Many people believe that in order to have neat and tidy streets in their neighborhood this should be the residents responsibility while other thinks it should be the government duty. What is your opinion?

Many people believe that in order to have neat and tidy streets in their neighborhood this should be the residents responsibility while other thinks it should be the government duty. What is your opinion? dyXK
It is imperative that our surroundings should be clean and tidy. Some people believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens to ensure that the streets are kept tidy; however, few others believe that the government has to keep the society clean. In my opinion, it is the responsibility of both to ascertain that the neighbourhood is kept clean. On the one hand, it is significant that the government provides a robust infrastructure for waste management. The government has to build waste collection boxes in each street so that people can conveniently dump their wastes. Consequently, they should build a team in collecting these rubbish from every streets regularly so that the waste does not get accumulated. For example, the government of India initiated scheme named Swach Bharat, in this scheme every road had trash cans installed and there a significant amount of waste found on the roads after the implementation of this program. Also, there must be a law for punishing individuals who do not follow the rules. People should be strictly adviced not to dump any waste on vacant lands, and if any individual breaks the law has to be punished severely so that others do not repeat it. On the other hand, people play a vital role in keeping the streets clean. It is essential that we live in a clean and neat environment. Today, there are various diseases that are spread because of dumping trash on roads. For example, in a recent survey by WHO it was found that a particular slum in Kochi had the highest number of dengue patients. And when the slum was visited, it was found that because of the huge pile of food waste, the mosquitoes numbers grew and lead to many people falling sick. To conclude, both the government and people has an equal responsibility to ensure that our neighbourhood is kept clean. If the proper infrastructure is built, most of the waste management problems will be under control.
It is imperative that our surroundings should be
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clean
and tidy.
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Some
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people
believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens to ensure that the
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streets
are
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kept
tidy;
however
, few others believe that the
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government
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has to
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keep
the society
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clean
. In my opinion, it is the responsibility of both to ascertain that the
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neighbourhood
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
clean.

On the one hand, it is significant that the
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government
provides a robust infrastructure for
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waste
management. The
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government
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has to
build
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waste
collection boxes in each
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street
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so
that
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people
can
conveniently
dump their
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wastes
.
Consequently
, they should build a team in collecting these rubbish from every
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streets
regularly
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so
that the
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waste
does not
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get
accumulated.
For example
, the
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government
of India initiated scheme named
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Swach
Bharat, in this scheme every road had trash cans installed and there a significant amount of
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waste
found on the roads after the implementation of this program.
Also
, there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be a law for punishing individuals who do not follow the
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rules
.
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People
should be
strictly
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adviced
not to dump any
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waste
on vacant lands, and if any individual breaks the law
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has to
be punished
severely
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so
that others do not repeat it.

On the other hand
,
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people
play a vital role in keeping the
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streets
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clean
. It is essential that we
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live
in a
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clean
and neat environment.
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Today
, there are various diseases that
are spread
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because
of dumping trash on roads.
For example
, in a recent survey by WHO it
was found
that a particular slum in
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Kochi
had the highest number of dengue patients. And when the slum
was visited
, it
was found
that
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because
of the huge pile of food
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waste
, the mosquitoes numbers grew and lead to
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many
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people
falling sick.

To conclude
, both the
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government
and
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people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
has
an equal responsibility to ensure that our
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neighbourhood
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clean
. If the proper infrastructure
is built
, most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
management problems will be under control.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that in order to have neat and tidy streets in their neighborhood this should be the residents responsibility while other thinks it should be the government duty. What is your opinion?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
330 words
6.0
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