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Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment? v.1

Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment? v. 1
A large section of the society thinks that it is more effective if all criminal punishments are fixed. This essay will first suggest that timesaving and quick justice is a primary benefit for the public, while unfair evaluation of criminals is the main drawback. The main advantage of having fixed punishments is that it will save lots of time of the judicial courts and justice will be served quickly. Many court cases take years and years to reach judgements. In many cases, circumstantial evidence is tampered with, due to this delay, and a lot of criminals escape their prison sentences. By issuing fixed sentences, the courts can take quicker actions against these wrongdoers who think that they can get away with their crimes. For example, the Saudi government announced capital punishment for any criminals involved in rape cases. This has led to a reduction in overall rape cases in the country. Despite this benefit, there are many others who think that implementing same punishments for all crimes is a very harsh and unfair treatment of the criminals. A lot of crimes are committed by different ages groups and under various circumstances. Therefore, it is important to evaluate every case differently and hand out punishments accordingly. For instance, a person who is a juvenile should be treated differently from an adult and sent to a rehabilitation center, because he still has time to correct himself and contribute to the society. In conclusion, fixed punishments ensure that justice is swift and criminals will be punished quickly, but there should also be a provision to evaluate certain cases based on their circumstantial evidence.
A large section of the society
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thinks
that it is more effective if all
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criminal
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punishments
are
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fixed
. This essay will
first
suggest that
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timesaving
and quick justice is a primary benefit for the public, while unfair evaluation of
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criminals
is the main drawback.

The main advantage of having
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fixed
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punishments
is that it will save lots of time of the judicial courts and justice will
be served
quickly
.
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Many
court cases take years and years to reach judgements. In
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many
cases, circumstantial evidence
is tampered
with, due to this delay, and
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a lot of
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criminals
escape their prison sentences. By issuing
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fixed
sentences, the courts can take quicker actions against these wrongdoers who
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think
that they can
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get
away with their crimes.
For example
, the Saudi
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government
announced capital
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punishment
for any
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criminals
involved in rape cases. This has led to a reduction in
overall
rape cases in the country.

Despite this benefit, there are
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many
others who
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think
that implementing same
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punishments
for all crimes is a
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very
harsh and unfair treatment of the
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criminals
.
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crimes
are committed
by
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different
ages groups and under various circumstances.
Therefore
, it is
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important
to evaluate every case
differently
and hand out
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punishments
accordingly
.
For instance
, a person who is a juvenile should
be treated
differently
from an adult and
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sent
to a rehabilitation center,
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because
he
still
has time to correct himself and contribute to the society.

In conclusion
,
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fixed
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punishments
ensure that justice is swift and
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criminals
will
be punished
quickly
,
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but
there should
also
be a provision to evaluate certain cases based on their circumstantial evidence.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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