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Many people believe that agricultural product are

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Shifting to mitigate the consequences, the government should make policies about price rates. Therefore, every people can afford food. Moreover, farmer should provide job, in which labor can earn money and buy food. However, it is not easy to convince merchants to stop black marketing, but throught the strict rules and regulations, many storagers or black marketers stop their shameless work. Besides that, the government and some NGOs should open free food stole, in which people get food at a reasonable price.
Shifting to mitigate the consequences, the
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government
should
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make
policies about price rates.
Therefore
, every
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people
can afford
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food
.
Moreover
, farmer should provide job, in which labor can earn money and
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buy
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food
.
However
, it is not easy to convince merchants to
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stop
black marketing,
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but
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throught
the strict
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rules
and regulations,
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many
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storagers
or black marketers
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stop
their shameless work.
Besides
that, the
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government
and
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some
NGOs should open free
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food
stole, in which
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people
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get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
at a reasonable price.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that agricultural product are

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
82 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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