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Many people believe that 18years old is the appropriate age to finish school. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Many people believe that 18years old is the appropriate age to finish school. with this statement. k60p8
It is irrefutable that the significance of tertiary education has come to yhe forefront of public awareness these days. Some people think that finishing school at the age of 18 is too long, However, I strongly believe that graduating at this age is essential. In the following paragraphs i will discuss rationale for both beliefs as well as proffer justification for my viewpoint in detail. First and foremost, there are fundamental reasons regarding those who does not favor long stay in school. The most supportive reason to this that university study is costly. This is because not parents can afford university especially with those whose income is below average rate. As a result, these students would way rather drop out and find alternatives like working mineal jobs than completing their education. Nevertheless, i firmly believe that graduating by the age of 18 is crucial. The most compelling reason stems from the fact that universities maintain standard and quality education. For this reason, students who spend most of their teenage life in school will enable them to finish their courses with masteral and doctorate degree on their chosen fields. Allied to this, these credentials will serve as ticket to land a high paid job and chances of promotions. Myself is a shining illustration to this, at the age of 18, I was able to have my degree. Although i am behind actual experience in a hospital field, I was hired immediately due to my level of education that I was able to attain in my college years. In conclusion, based on the aforementioned statements, I pendown saying that graduating by the age of 18 aids you to gain knowledge and credentials Which are the cornerstone to success.
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forefront of public awareness these days.
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that finishing school at the
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of 18 is too long,
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is essential. In the following paragraphs
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will discuss rationale for both beliefs
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as well as
proffer justification for my viewpoint in detail.

First
and foremost, there are fundamental
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reasons
regarding those who does not favor long stay in school. The most supportive
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reason
to this that university study is costly. This is
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because
not parents can afford university
especially
with those whose income is below average rate.
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rather
drop out and find alternatives like working
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mineal
jobs than completing their education.

Nevertheless
,
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i
firmly
believe that graduating by the
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age
of 18 is crucial. The most compelling
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reason
stems from the fact that universities maintain standard and quality education. For this
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reason
, students who spend most of their teenage life in school will enable them to finish their courses with
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masteral
and doctorate degree on their chosen fields. Allied to this, these credentials will serve as ticket to land a high paid job and chances of promotions. Myself is a shining illustration to this, at the
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age
of 18, I was able to have my degree. Although
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i
am behind actual experience in a hospital field, I
was hired
immediately due to my level of education that I was able to attain in my college years.

In conclusion
, based on the aforementioned statements, I
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saying that graduating by the
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of 18 aids you to gain knowledge and credentials Which are the cornerstone to success.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that 18years old is the appropriate age to finish school. with this statement.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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