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Talk about your plan for your next vacation

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Summer vacation is most important for students life. Due to carona penademic year, all cities are closed. That time, I did not go for any kind of vacation. But, today I would like to talk about a next month plan, I will go to shimla. Shimla, the beautiful capital of himachal pradesh. It is one of the most popular tourist place. I will go in july. Especially, during the summer months, a number of tourists visit to this place. I will go on almost 4-5days. First day I will booked the hotel. I enjoyed with my family. I will eat some sea food and kind of fruits. Second day I will be seen Himalayan bird park and Christ church. I never use the lift. So, I decided third day I will enjoyed lift. It is cool and pleasant climate of shimla. Last day I will be plan to the ridge of shimla. It is very big shopping mall. I will buy some clothes and footwear. So I want to planned for shimla. It is very coolest weather. All in all, it is tourist attraction that is visited by thousands of people each day. I definitely go to next month for see this place.
Summer vacation is most
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important
for students life. Due to
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carona
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penademic
year, all cities
are closed
. That time, I did not go for any kind of vacation.
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But
,
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today
I would like to talk about a
next
month plan, I will go to
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shimla
.
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Shimla
, the
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beautiful
capital of
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himachal pradesh
. It is one of the most popular tourist place. I will go in
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july
.
Especially
, during the summer months, a number of tourists visit to this place. I will go on almost 4-5days.
First
day I will
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booked
the hotel. I enjoyed with my family. I will eat
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some
sea food and kind of fruits. Second day I will be
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seen
Himalayan bird park and Christ church. I never
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use
the lift.
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So
, I decided third day I will
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enjoyed
lift. It is cool and pleasant climate of
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shimla
. Last day I will be
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plan
to the ridge of
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shimla
. It is
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very
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big
shopping mall. I will
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buy
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some
clothes and footwear.
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So
I want to
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planned
for
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shimla
. It is
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very
coolest weather. All in all, it is tourist attraction that
is visited
by thousands of
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people
each day. I definitely go to
next
month for
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see
this place.
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IELTS essay Talk about your plan for your next vacation

Essay
  American English
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203 words
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