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Many people assume that the goal every country should be to produce more material and goods. To what extent do you agree disagree.

Many people assume that the goal every country should be to produce more material and goods. kYWE8
A large of number masses belive thatbit had better if each counrty have a goal to produce more materil and goods. I partial agree with this statement, this wassy would shed lihjt on both point of views. To commence with, it is irrefutably true that the developement of nation determine by their gross domestic production in any sector of economy such as tourism, industrilization and education etc. First and foremost counrty with high manufacturing goods and material alway higher employement rate than other nations. for example, the United State of American is hub of tecnology sector due the availbility of resources there for manufacturing hardware componets. Secodly country with high rate of production have scored huge rank in global marketing index, due to this these countries are eligible for finacial assistance from world organisations such as world bank to boost their productivity. On the flip side, these kind of developement have few drawbacks to, intially these nations should impact environment negetively, because these countries have large industry setup which leads to more pollution and degrade the quality of air and water. To demonstrate india has recongnised at first position for producing rice(oriyza sativa) worlwide although india for this huge quantity of water required which is extracted from ground. Due to this water level of ground would be fallen. Moreover the also leads to degrade air quality due to uses of pesticides and fertilizers for producing more yiled. In conclusion, it necessory for every nation that they should produce more product by utilizing their resources propery but without detirorating envrionment.
A large of number masses
belive
thatbit
had better if each
counrty
have a goal to produce more
materil
and
goods
.
I partial
agree
with this statement, this
wassy
would shed
lihjt
on both point of views.

To commence with, it is
irrefutably
true that the
developement
of
nation
determine by their gross domestic production in any sector of economy such as tourism,
industrilization
and education etc.
First
and foremost
counrty
with high manufacturing
goods
and material
alway
higher
employement
rate than other
nations
.
for
example, the United State of American is hub of
tecnology
sector
due
the
availbility
of resources there for manufacturing hardware
componets
.
Secodly
country with high rate of production have scored huge rank in global marketing index,
due
to this these countries are eligible for
finacial
assistance from world
organisations
such as
world bank
to boost their productivity.

On the flip side,
these kind
of
developement
have few drawbacks to,
intially
these
nations
should impact environment
negetively
,
because
these countries have large industry setup which leads to more pollution and degrade the quality of air and water. To demonstrate
india
has
recongnised
at
first
position for producing rice(
oriyza
sativa
)
worlwide
although
india
for this huge quantity of water required which
is extracted
from ground.
Due
to this water level of ground would
be fallen
.
Moreover
the
also
leads to degrade air quality
due
to
uses
of pesticides and fertilizers for producing more
yiled
.

In conclusion
, it
necessory
for every
nation
that they should produce more product by utilizing their resources
propery
but
without
detirorating
envrionment
.
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IELTS essay Many people assume that the goal every country should be to produce more material and goods.

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