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Many people argue that movies provide better experience than reading a book. Compare and contrast.

Many people argue that movies provide better experience than reading a book. Compare and contrast. o63JD
Entertainment has become a part of everyone's' lives. Some people prefer reading books while others prefer watching movies. This essay will compare and contrast both the views. There are mainly three reasons why people prefer watching movies rather than reading a book. Firstly, movies provide an audiovisual experience which makes it more interesting to watch. Audiovisuals makes people feel connected to the characters. For example, the movies like "Harry Potter" are quite famous because of the visual effects created by the directors which makes the movie interesting. Moreover, there are many people who do not like to read books so for them watching movie is a better option. Finally, films can be watched with group of friends because of which it is quite famous among the youngsters and it is more fun to enjoy them with popcorns or coke. Although, films provide good experience they are quite costly than the books. With advent of technology many sci-fi movies are preferred over books as it makes it more interesting. For instance, sci-fi movies like "Iron Man" are more fun if they are watched in cinema as audiovisuals and VFX technology are the main feature of attraction in such movies. Many people who have good imagination power prefer reading books as it is convenient and cheaper. They argue on reading books as it can build imagination power. In conclusion, preference of people about watching movie or reading a book depends on the person but it is true that many sci-fi films provide better experience than reading books.
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Some
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reading
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books
while others
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prefer
watching
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movies
. This essay will compare and contrast both the views.

There are
mainly
three reasons why
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people
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prefer
watching
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movies
rather
than
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reading
a
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book
.
Firstly
,
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movies
provide an audiovisual experience which
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makes
it more interesting to
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watch
. Audiovisuals
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makes
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people
feel connected to the characters.
For example
, the
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movies
like
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"
Harry Potter
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are quite
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famous
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because
of the visual effects created by the directors which
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makes
the
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movie
interesting.
Moreover
, there are
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many
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people
who do not like to read
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books
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so
for them watching
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movie
is a better option.
Finally
, films can be
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watched
with group of friends
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because
of which it is quite
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famous
among the youngsters and it is more fun to enjoy them with
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popcorns
or coke.

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, films provide
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good
experience they are quite
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costly
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books
. With advent of technology
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many
sci-fi
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movies
are preferred
over
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books
as it
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makes
it more interesting.
For instance
, sci-fi
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movies
like
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Iron
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Man
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are more fun if they are
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watched
in cinema as audiovisuals and VFX technology are the main feature of attraction in such
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movies
.
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people
who have
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good
imagination power
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prefer
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reading
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books
as it is convenient and cheaper. They argue on
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reading
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books
as it can build imagination power.

In conclusion
, preference of
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people
about watching
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movie
or
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reading
a
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book
depends on the person
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but
it is true that
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many
sci-fi films provide better experience than
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reading
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books
.
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IELTS essay Many people argue that movies provide better experience than reading a book. Compare and contrast.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
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