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Many people argue that due to widespread internet accessibility, libraries are not necessary anymore. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that due to widespread internet accessibility, libraries are not necessary anymore. 56pGm
Libraries have been an imperative part of the educational system in all nations and cultures for ages. However, with the introduction of the internet in the 1990s, these immense sources of knowledge have lost their value. This essay will debate in the support of this statement. First of all, the ease of accessing literature and books have outdated the traditional library culture. Since the internet has facilitated us to reach all sorts of study material through online websites, people no longer feel necessary to manage time to visit the libraries nearby to read the topics of their interests. As a result, libraries are getting abandoned day by day. Moreover, smart gadgets and electronic book readers are much more convenient options than carrying heavy paper books. For instance, a small handheld tablet can be used to download millions of books from online webpages within minutes and individuals do not have to carry bulky books with them everywhere. Therefore, this flexibility encourages people to use the internet, rather than borrowing books from libraries and carrying them around everywhere. Furthermore, finding literature on the topics of one's interest on the internet is easier compared to searching for it in libraries. For example, if a person is interested in ancient history and wants to read about it, thousands of web pages and online material would be available with a single search on online search engines. Due to the time-saving nature of this modern piece of technology, fewer and fewer people are interested in visiting libraries nowadays. In conclusion, a number of people are of the opinion that the internet has outdated the traditional library culture. I personally agree with this point of view and this essay had provided reasons for it.
Libraries have been an imperative part of the educational system in all nations and cultures for ages.
However
, with the introduction of the internet in the 1990s, these immense sources of knowledge have lost their value. This essay will debate in the support of this statement.

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First of all
, the
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ease
of accessing literature and
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have outdated the traditional library culture. Since the internet has facilitated us to reach all sorts of study material through
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online
websites,
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people
no longer feel necessary to manage time to visit the libraries nearby to read the topics of their interests.
As a result
, libraries are getting abandoned day by day.

Moreover
, smart gadgets and electronic
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book
readers are much more convenient options than carrying heavy paper
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books
.
For instance
, a
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small
handheld tablet can be
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used
to download millions of
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books
from
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online
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webpages
within minutes and individuals do not
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have to
carry bulky
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books
with them everywhere.
Therefore
, this flexibility encourages
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people
to
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use
the internet,
rather
than borrowing
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books
from libraries and carrying them around everywhere.

Furthermore
, finding literature on the topics of one's interest on the internet is easier compared to searching for it in libraries.
For example
, if a person
is interested
in ancient history and wants to read about it, thousands of web pages and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
material would be available with a single search on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
search engines. Due to the time-saving nature of this modern piece of technology, fewer and fewer
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people
are interested
in visiting libraries nowadays.

In conclusion
, a number of
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people
are of the opinion that the internet has outdated the traditional library culture. I
personally
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agree
with this point of view and this essay had provided reasons for it.
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IELTS essay Many people argue that due to widespread internet accessibility, libraries are not necessary anymore.

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