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green day concert review

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Green Day is undoubtedly one of the most influential punk band in music history. Fans hadn’t heard much of them for years, until last January when they announced their new album along with a world tour, which also included Hungary. Never have I had been to a more incredible concert before. Their concert in Budapest came as a surprise for everyone as the last time they visited our country was almost two decades ago. Moreover, it wasn’t even planned in the official tour spots.
Green Day is
undoubtedly
one of the most influential punk band in music history. Fans hadn’t heard much of them for years, until last January when they announced their new album along with a world tour, which
also
included Hungary. Never have I had been to a more incredible concert
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Their concert in Budapest came as a surprise for everyone as the last time they visited our country was almost two decades ago.
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, it wasn’t even planned in the official tour spots.
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IELTS essay green day concert review

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