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Many people are prepared to do whatever it take to succeed. Do you agree that the end justifies the means? How can being overly ambitous affect a person?

Many people are prepared to do whatever it take to succeed. Do you agree that the end justifies the means? How can being overly ambitous affect a person? Vw75J
In this developing community, the majority of us have a higher ambition than average. Some ambitious people can do anything, by all means, to obtain what they desire, they just crave accomplishments. Personally, I do not agree with that, as we can be ambitious but do not beyond the limit. If being overly ambitious, we can be adversely affected. Initially, being ambitious is not always a negative quality, especially for those who want to set up a business or who want to become successful. However, sometimes, ambition is a double-edged sword. If someone can do anything whatever it costs, even doing something wrong just to achieve their goals, they can easily damage others around them. Therefore, sometimes we have to dominate ourselves to not exceed the limits. As all the reasons mentioned above, being too ambitious can detrimentally impact on us. Excessive ambition can make people grow uncontrolled growth so that when failing immediately they will have negative reactions to failure, moreover, they will likely to being selfish and being imbalanced. To sum up, ambition can show a person both negative and positive sides, so that we need to wisely limit it. So that not always be negative to being ambitious.
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can do anything, by all means, to obtain what they desire, they
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crave accomplishments.
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do not beyond the limit. If being
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, we can be
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affected
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Initially
, being
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is not always a
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quality,
especially
for those who want to set up a business or who want to become successful.
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,
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is a double-edged sword. If someone can do anything whatever it costs, even doing something
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to achieve their goals, they can
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,
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we
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dominate ourselves to not exceed the limits.

As all the reasons mentioned above, being too
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can
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impact on us.

Excessive
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can
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grow uncontrolled growth
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that when failing immediately they will have
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reactions to failure,
moreover
, they will likely to being selfish and
being imbalanced
.

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a person both
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negative
and
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sides,
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that we need to
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IELTS essay Many people are prepared to do whatever it take to succeed. Do you agree that the end justifies the means? How can being overly ambitous affect a person?

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