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During the past 4 months of practicing at EAP Education

During the past 4 months of practicing at EAP Education lLynK
During the past 4 months of practicing at EAP Education, this is probably not a very long period of time, but I think that period of time is extremely meaningful and precious, and indispensable for me for about long. time in college, and this was my chance to make my teacher's dreams come true. From start to finish, I researched everything that might not have come across in theory. This is a time for me to learn and accumulate experiences, ready for my new job in the future.
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for me to learn and accumulate experiences, ready for my new job in the future.

IELTS essay During the past 4 months of practicing at EAP Education

Essay
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1 paragraphs
88 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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