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Many people are now spending a lot of time travelling to work or school.Some people believe that is an negative development

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First, let us consider the disadvantages of this trend. In my country, the majority of people drive to work or school, as a consequence, our fossil fuels are likely to be depleted in the very near future. Moreover, if people drive more and more, the more carbon emissions there will be in the atmosphere, which will further exacerbte our current environmental problems. Spending more time driving to work or school also means that people will have less time to do important tasks. If it takes a person about 30 minutes to get to their destination, then they will lose approximately 15 hours a month. That invaluable amount of time could be better spent. People can use this time to relax or do important tasks

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