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Many people are moving from villages to urban centers lately. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Many people are moving from villages to urban centers lately. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? VQdmK

These days people are relocating from rural areas to urban cities. There are several advantages and disadvantages when moving from native place to new town. The few good things in relocating to urban cities. Firstly, they will be easily accessible to their basic needs. When they have moved to urban areas it could help them to travel easily from one place to another and they have access to the new environment. As a result, they will adapt to the urban environment and also they can fulfil their day to day more easily. In addition to that, their kids and families get good schools and health care facilities. When their kids get quality education it will en route their future possibilities. Having said that, some disadvantages also exist when they relocate from villages to urban cities. Firstly, they tend to live at a higher cost of living. When they live in the

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