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Living in city is different from living in countryside

Living in city is different from living in countryside R2Qj8

Living in the city area still dream for many people to enjoy the access to everything with an ease but mostly old age people want to return to their village area so they can live a normal life and can enjoy the nature and the environment. In my context both city and countryside have their own benefits. With regards to people it is better for them to live in city for some extent because here they have better facilities are compare to countryside. They can have a lots of job options so they could easily establish themselves in the city with with these people get lots of option in shopping, eating and transporting. Every faculty is available at possible least distance to them. For example in city we easily get every type of thing even small to big everywhere but countryside people have to travel to the city to buy even small things.

Living in the city area still
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many
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people
 to enjoy the access to everything with an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
ease
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but
mostly
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 age You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 want to return to their village area This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 a normal life and can enjoy the nature and the environment. In my context both city and countryside have their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 benefits.

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people
 it is better for them to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
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some
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because
 here they have better facilities are compare to countryside. They can have Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a lot" or simply "lots"?a lotlots
a lots
 of job options This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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people
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get
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 in city we easily
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get
 every type of thing even This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
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big
 everywhere This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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people
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have to
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buy
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small
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