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Living in city is different from living in countryside

Living in city is different from living in countryside R2Qj8
Living in the city area still dream for many people to enjoy the access to everything with an ease but mostly old age people want to return to their village area so they can live a normal life and can enjoy the nature and the environment. In my context both city and countryside have their own benefits. With regards to people it is better for them to live in city for some extent because here they have better facilities are compare to countryside. They can have a lots of job options so they could easily establish themselves in the city with with these people get lots of option in shopping, eating and transporting. Every faculty is available at possible least distance to them. For example in city we easily get every type of thing even small to big everywhere but countryside people have to travel to the city to buy even small things.
Living in the city area
still
dream for
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many
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people
to enjoy the access to everything with an
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ease
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but
mostly
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old
age
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people
want to return to their village area
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so
they can
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live
a normal life and can enjoy the nature and the environment. In my context both city and countryside have their
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own
benefits.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
With regards to
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people
it is better for them to
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live
in city for
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some
extent
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because
here they have better facilities are compare to countryside. They can have
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a lot" or simply "lots"?
a lots
of job options
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so
they could
easily
establish themselves in the city
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with with
these
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people
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get
lots of option in shopping, eating and transporting. Every faculty is available at possible least distance to them.
For example
in city we
easily
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get
every type of thing even
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small
to
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big
everywhere
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but
countryside
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people
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have to
travel to the city to
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buy
even
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small
things.

IELTS essay Living in city is different from living in countryside

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
153 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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