People have bigger aspiration, unlike the past, and they are willing to leave their home and move in the cities for the sake of job and study. There are numerous reasons for this trend and each has its own merits and demerits. I believe, the merits of this behaviour overshadow the demerits.
The benefit of moving into the city for job purpose is that an individual gets better job prospects as compared to the rural areas. In the cities, multinational companies provide remuneration as per industry standard, and there are more opportunities to grow as an individual. For instance, customer care centres are the first attraction for many people who comes from the rural region to earn better with minimum qualification. Since competition is also mushrooming in the educational field, students come into the city to join the best educational institutes to compete with others.
On the contrary, despite the fact that people enter into the city to secure various goals, they get indulged in notorious activities under the influence of locals. They may get deviated from their target and forget their priorities. Furthermore, in the cities, the living cost is more than the villages and to fulfil them people sometimes follow the wrong path. A recent survey concluded that about 40 percent of people who come from villages, commit various crimes such as snatching, robbery and alcohol consumption.
To conclude, although there are some downsides when people leave their homes for study or jobs in the cities, the benefits to both individual and nations outweigh the demerits.
People
have bigger aspiration, unlike the past, and they are willing to
leave
their home and
move
in the
cities
for the sake of
job
and study. There are numerous reasons for this trend and each has its
own
merits and demerits. I believe, the merits of this
behaviour
overshadow the demerits.
The benefit of moving into the city for
job
purpose is that an individual
gets
better
job
prospects as compared to the rural areas. In the
cities
, multinational
companies
provide remuneration as per industry standard, and there are more opportunities to grow as an individual.
For instance
, customer care
centres
are the
first
attraction for
many
people
who
comes
from the rural region to earn better with minimum qualification. Since competition is
also
mushrooming in the educational field, students
come
into the city to
join
the best educational institutes to compete with others.
On the contrary
, despite the fact that
people
enter into the city to secure various goals, they
get
indulged in notorious activities under the influence of locals. They may
get
deviated from their target and forget their priorities.
Furthermore
, in the
cities
, the living cost is more than the villages and to fulfil them
people
sometimes
follow the
wrong
path. A recent survey concluded that about 40 percent of
people
who
come
from villages, commit various crimes such as snatching, robbery and alcohol consumption.
To conclude
, although there are
some
downsides when
people
leave
their homes for study or
jobs
in the
cities
, the benefits to both individual and nations outweigh the demerits.
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14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes