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The greenhouse effect is one of the most heated topic of modern society What are the main problems it causes And what are the solutions for it v.1

The greenhouse effect is one of the most heated topic of modern society What are the main problems it causes And what are the solutions for it v. 1
Some argue that the garbage from our homes lacks sufficient recycling, and governments can improve this situation by implementing laws, that make it legally mandatory. This essay agrees with this point of view because these rules will help us in producing cost-effective products and in controlling environmental pollution. Many people opine that the current reprocessing of domestic waste is not enough and authorities should make new laws that would enforce this. That is to say, imposing these regulations will encourage corporations to produce more and cheaper recycled products, therefore reducing the cost of using new commodities. To illustrate, this will increase the reuse of plastic from existing bottles instead of using raw material. As a result, the cost of the products will reduce. For example, the annual report published by P&G stated that, when one of the US laws compel them to utilised reused polymers for the containers of their product head and shoulder, the selling price was reduced by 30%. Furthermore, such legislation will encourage people to augment their bio and non-organic waste in recycling plants instead of accumulating in the environment. House waste is extremely hazardous for our soil and ocean, when non-biodegradable trash and e-waste, which is being thrown in the open, will decline, our cities will become healthier, and the likelihood of contamination will decrease. For instance, after the introduction of the recycling Act 2011 in South Africa, people stopped dumping their trash into the open, and the pollution footprint was enormously reduced by 90%. In conclusion, I agree that such legal steps will enforce everyone to recycle their non-commercial waste, and this will make various consumer products cheaper and will aid us in curbing the pollution on earth.
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governments
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improve
this situation by implementing laws, that
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mandatory. This essay
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with this point of view
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because
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rules
will
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help
us in producing cost-effective
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products
and in controlling environmental pollution.

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people
opine that the
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current
reprocessing of domestic
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waste
is not
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enough
and authorities should
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make
new laws that would enforce this.
That is
to say, imposing these regulations will encourage corporations to produce more and cheaper recycled
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products
,
therefore
reducing the cost of using new commodities. To illustrate, this will increase the reuse of plastic from existing bottles
instead
of using raw material.
As a result
, the cost of the
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products
will
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reduce
.
For example
, the annual report published by P&G stated that, when one of the US laws compel them to
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utilised
reused polymers for the containers of their
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product
head and shoulder, the selling price was
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reduced
by 30%.

Furthermore
, such legislation will encourage
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people
to augment their bio and non-organic
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waste
in recycling plants
instead
of accumulating in the environment.
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House
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waste
is
extremely
hazardous for our soil and ocean, when non-biodegradable trash and e-waste, which is
being thrown
in the open, will decline, our cities will become healthier, and the likelihood of contamination will decrease.
For instance
, after the introduction of the recycling Act 2011 in South Africa,
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people
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stopped
dumping their trash into the open, and the pollution footprint was
enormously
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reduced
by 90%.

In conclusion
, I
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agree
that such legal steps will enforce everyone to recycle their non-commercial
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waste
, and this will
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make
various consumer
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products
cheaper and will aid us in curbing the pollution on earth.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay The greenhouse effect is one of the most heated topic of modern society What are the main problems it causes And what are the solutions for it v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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