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Many people are afraid to leave their home because of crime. Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime. What is your view?

Many people are afraid to leave their home because of crime. Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime. What is your view? aqeAd

A major section of our society feels insecure because of increasing sin, which results in staying indoors most of the time. Majority urge that strict steps should be the key to eradicate this emerging challenge. In my opinion, the government should play an important role to eliminate the ratio of misdeed as far as possible. First and foremost, unemployment is one of the root causes. This is because the young generation does not have ample opportunities, instead of making money, they choose unnecessary ways that lead to offense. As a result, pick-pocketing, loot in the daytime, snatching ornaments often seen in nearby with each passing days. Likewise,

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 role to eliminate the ratio of misdeed as far as possible.

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 in nearby with each passing days. Likewise
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