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Many people aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives,but few people

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In this epoch, set a goal to a

balance between the and, they do not achieve it, while other

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do
it. I will discuss, the caused behind this
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phenomenon


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as
how we can solve this issue, I will it in my forth coming paragraphs. To

commence with, there are numerous reasons that, humans
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tackle


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to
achieve better balance. To it, The

employees of industries for long to complete the

targets. They spend their for their, there is

competition between the staff members and other industries, for that
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they


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high
pay rates, Meanwhile, they can be able to various equipments

which their smooth.
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,
they do not give proper time to their

family members, their.
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,
unable to stable their and.

They grant preference to their as compare to their household.
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,
this situation can be by the of certain steps

that human beings should obey. To explicate it, authority should implement,

strict laws, regarding the limit of working of works and provide two day

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at
every week.
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through
that, they give their best for, if they offer to them.
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they may their student status and pay a fine.
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by alleviating in duties, they have time to take care themselves

and their family.
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, masses tackle obstacles while compromise

between and. This can be by reducing the
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working


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duties.

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canada
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IELTS essay Many people aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives, but few people

Essay
  American English
12 paragraphs
311 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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