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The story is about a large family. They have inhabited the big house, out of the city. The clan consisted of three girls and two boys also their father was an army soldier before he was addicted to wagering on football matches however, Their mother was a strong housewife. On a frigid day, the family had a cute party. It was Billy’s birthday. Alisha was his mother, she made a big cake for her son’s party. Other children had fun singing a song which tempts Alisha to start dance but the father recline on a sofa and he had only attention on TV. By a second Billy’s vision, became blurred and all movements around were stopped. He turned with a numb body to watch around. His father was still laying on the couch and there was a dismal sound from the TV. Suddenly he saw a sinister-looking of himself on the TV screen. The sound was: “Conceal yourself somewhere the peril could not find you”. By the sound over, everything became natural and time returned normal.

The story is about a large family. They have inhabited the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, out of the city. The clan consisted of three girls and two boys also
 their father was an army soldier This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 he was addicted
 to wagering on football matches however
, Their mother was a strong housewife.

On a frigid day, the family had a cute party. It was Billy’s birthday. Alisha was his mother, she made a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 cake for her son’s party. Other children had fun singing a song which tempts Alisha to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 dance This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the father recline on a Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).sofa, and
sofa and
 he had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 attention on TV. By a second Billy’s vision, became blurred and all movements around were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceaseddiscontinued
stopped
. He turned with a numb body to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 around. His father was still
 laying on the couch and there was a dismal sound from the TV. Suddenly
 he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a sinister-looking of himself on the TV screen. The sound was: “Conceal yourself somewhere the peril could not find you”. By the sound over, everything became natural and time returned normal. 