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Describe about alternative energy sources

Describe about alternative energy sources 6LP58
In future natural gas and oils reserve will be run out at that time we need to resource about renewable energy, It is also beneficial or drawbacks of alternative energy sources, so we would like discuss about this topic in below. Present day energy source are comfortably available but getting into the future it is extremely stiffly, so organization should resurch on optionally power sources. Time to time oil and gas sources constantly decreasing in our own world, so community should discover against optional resources solution. Many scientists are working for an alternative energy source like solar energy systems, wind power system, hydro electric power and etc. On one hand we can see, it's beneficial, it is through society can overcome pollution and environment for world. If community mostly use of renewable resources, it's throughout their can benefit from economically and socially. We should be use to renewable resources. On other hand drawbacks of alternative resources late us see one example of hydro power project, for that we required widely dam and also that full of water, so it's very degangurs for local people and environment when dam wil have been damage. In conclusion, I believe that alternative energy source is essential for our pollution control criticism and in future we would like to encourage alternative energy resource.
In future natural gas and oils reserve will
be run
out at that time we need to
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resource
about renewable
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energy
, It is
also
beneficial or drawbacks of
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alternative
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energy
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sources
,
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so
we would like
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discuss about this
topic in below. Present day
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energy
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source
are
comfortably
available
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but
getting into the future it is
extremely
stiffly
,
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so
organization should
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resurch
on
optionally
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power
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sources
. Time to time oil and gas
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sources
constantly
decreasing in our
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own
world,
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so
community should discover against optional
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resources
solution.
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Many
scientists are working for an
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alternative
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energy
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source
like solar
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energy
systems, wind
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power
system,
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hydro electric
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power
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and etc
. On one hand we can
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see
, it's beneficial, it is through society can overcome pollution and environment for world. If community
mostly
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use
of renewable resources, it's throughout their can benefit from
economically
and
socially
. We should be
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use
to renewable resources. On other hand drawbacks of
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alternative
resources late us
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see
one example of hydro
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power
project, for that we required
widely
dam and
also
that full of water,
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so
it's
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very
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degangurs
for local
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people
and environment when dam
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wil
have been damage.
In conclusion
, I believe that
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alternative
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energy
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source
is essential for our pollution control criticism and in future we would like to encourage
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alternative
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energy
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resource
.
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IELTS essay Describe about alternative energy sources

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
218 words
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